The Demon Chronicles by iwrite co

My story the demon chronicles no posting on this thread only for story I'll make a feedback thread

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Chapter 1:Sid

Sid was a thin boy who never had very much money in his pocket. He lived only with his mother eversince his father died from the with Perion. His father was a soldier who always made just enough money to keep the food on their table and the roof above their heads. But after he died, their was always a scarcity of money and life became hard. Sid lived on a lonly farm just west of the city Gurda. He and his mother knew the time would come soon when Sid would have to pick up the sword of his father and join the army to keep the family alive. But that day never came because, one night, while Sid and his mother were sleeping, the Dragoons attaked the city. The Dragoons were a gang of mercenaries who would work for anyone with money. Sid had woke up when he heard the cries and screams for help
An knew he had little time to either run or make a stand. He knew it would be smarter to run so he bolted out of the house. When he was near the forest, he remenered he had forgotten about his mother. He ran back, but knew he would not make it to the house before the Dragoons reach it. They would either burn the house down or capture his mother. He didn't make it. The house was already in a blaze by the time he reached it. He knew it was hopeless. The inferno that used to be his house would engulf his mother very quickly. He had jk choice but to hide in the woods and see what he could find after the flames died down. Sid waited until dawn when the last embers died then decided to check out what was left. He found that the tool shed had amazingly been over looked. He went inside and found a rusty pitchfork and a canteen. He was homeless and poor. He knew he could only search for a new life. He ran into the woods.

 

Chapter 1:Sid

Sid was a thin boy who never had very much money in his pocket. He lived only with his mother eversince his father died from the with Perion. His father was a soldier who always made just enough money to keep the food on their table and the roof above their heads. But after he died, their was always a scarcity of money and life became hard. Sid lived on a lonly farm just west of the city Gurda. He and his mother knew the time would come soon when Sid would have to pick up the sword of his father and join the army to keep the family alive. But that day never came because, one night, while Sid and his mother were sleeping, the Dragoons attaked the city. The Dragoons were a gang of mercenaries who would work for anyone with money. Sid had woke up when he heard the cries and screams for help
An knew he had little time to either run or make a stand. He knew it would be smarter to run so he bolted out of the house. When he was near the forest, he remenered he had forgotten about his mother. He ran back, but knew he would not make it to the house before the Dragoons reach it. They would either burn the house down or capture his mother. He didn't make it. The house was already in a blaze by the time he reached it. He knew it was hopeless. The inferno that used to be his house would engulf his mother very quickly. He had jk choice but to hide in the woods and see what he could find after the flames died down. Sid waited until dawn when the last embers died then decided to check out what was left. He found that the tool shed had amazingly been over looked. He went inside and found a rusty pitchfork and a canteen. He was homeless and poor. He knew he could only search for a new life. He ran into the woods.

 

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Chap 2: Cassandra


Cassandra's head hurt. In fact her whole body ached. Cassandra, or as her friends call her Cass, was lying in a small jail cell. It was empty except for a small bundle of blankets and a hole, which Cass expected was the bathroom. She tried to move around, but was bound to the floor by thick, heavy chains. Then Cass remebered how she got into this mess. Her tiny village was attacked by demons. Houses were burned to the ground and people were imprisoned. "Good, your up." said avoice behind the bars of the cell. A man was standing there. But this man radiated evil. "I am Duke, servent to the Demon Lord. And you are a werewolf. An animal." said the man. "What is your name?" Duke asked. Cass didn't answer. "I said WHAT IS YOUR NAME?!?" Duke repeated, angrily. But before she had time to answer, another man came up, this one with dark red skin and horns jutting out of his head. "Master, some merchants are apporching. Want should we do?" the demon asked. " I will deal with them." Duke told the demon. As soon as they were out of sight, Cassandra began to work out her escape plan. She transformed into a wolf and hacked away at the chains. Eventually they came free. Then Cass dug the toilet hole deeper until she could fit in it. She managed to dig her way out of the cell. Just before she could run away a guard saw her. "One of the prisoners is escapeing!" he exclaimed. One of? Cassandra thought There are more? But then she saw Duke running in her direction, in full demon fury. His skin and hair seemed to be burning and his eyes looked wild with rage. Before he could reach her, Cass spun around and smacked Duke in the face with the chain still attached to her arms. Duke howled in pain and the chain left a deep, angry gash across his face. Cassandra wondered how he would react to his new battle scar, but she didn't wait to find out. She ran into the woods.

 

Chap 3: Utho

Utho walked into a bar in the dwarven city of Bruinshire. He remebered the events leading up to what he was about to do. Someone had approuched him in an alleyway on his way home. The mysterious person had told him that he would get a large sum of gold for a specific job. The person asked Utho to assasinate the mayor of Bruinshire. They had privided Utho with a crossbow and a single arrow.A SINGLE ARROW. Utho was a terrible shot but the person ashured him he could do it. So here Utho is now. Utho climes the steps to the upper level of the bar, walked into one of the rooms and locked the door behind him. He had never thought of himself as a killer, a thief maybe, but not a killed. Yet he was just about to do that. Kill. Utho set up by the window of the room. He knew this had to be a perfect shot or else he would have failed and have no money. Just as the mayor paraded by on a white horse, Utho shot the crossbow. The arrow wizzed through the air, but Utho felt as if time was half it's normal speed. He watched the arrow, wondering if he would regret this moment. No. He wouldent. This was for money and, as his father used to say, money is power. After an exhausting 6 seconds, the arrow finnally struck the mayor of the city. He was knocked of his horse and lay dead in the street. Utho walked away and snuck out of the city. Little did he know, he had started a domino effect that would end in the city of Bruinshire. And that he had just don the bidding of the Demon Lord.

 

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Chap 4: Matt

Matt was a common thief. He was poor and was too young to get a good job to live off of. But, he was no Robin Hood, no stealing from the rich and giving to the poor. He stole for himself. Matt lived in the crowded elvin city on Forak. He had no family, no friends, and no money. All he ad was himself and a pair of daggers that his father had given him, back when he had a family. The city I Forak was an urban jungle, filled with people and buildings. Matt desperatly wanted to escape this nightmare, but he needed money. And money was one of he things he was short of. Matt's house, if you could call it a house, was the cellar of an inn. The owner barely ever came down here, so Matt was never discovered. Well almost never. One day, when Matt was coming into the cellar after a horrible day of pickpocketing and violence, Matt saw a little girl l, most likely the inn owners daughter, standing in the room. Matt's first thought was to hide, but it was too late. The girl was staring wide eyes at Matt. So he turned around and ran. He needed to escape. He ran all the way to the gate leading out of the city. He knew to make it beyond the gate, he needed to pay. Or be could open it for himself. He quikly ran toward the guardhouse. He was either going to have to kill the guards or end up in jail for assualt AND tresspassing. He walked in and slit the first guards throut with his daggers. This was a new feeling. Killing. His daggers used to be just for show, like intimidation. But now, they had a new purpose. He searched the body of the guard. He found a small pouch of money and a sword. He too both of these. He pulled a lever inside the guardhouse and heard some gears moving. Good. That must open the gate, Matt thought to himself. He walked outside and saw a fist rocketing toward his face. It was the other guard. The fist made contact and broke Matt's nose . Matt was hurt, but he had been in many street fights before. He pulled a dagger out and stabbd the guard in the stomach. The guard fell over, dead. Matt was now a murderer. And what was he going to do about it? He was going to run. Matt ran out of the city and into the dark if the woods.

 

Chap 5: Sid

Sid was tired and hungry. He wished he had brought some food with him, but he didn't. At least had some water. He hadn't slept for days and he was barly awake.

 

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Chap 5(continued)


On the third day of Sid's nightmare, Sid was knocked down by a wolf. He managed to kick it off, but then he saw the wolf transform into a girl. Sid had heard about these human-wolf hybrids, but had never seen one because they supposidly lived on isolated packs. The shewolf snarled and asked, "Who are you? And what are you doing here? Answer soon or you'll find out how fast a human can be ripped apart." Sid answered, " uhhhh........My name is Sid and......uhh.........My house was destroyed by mercenaries so......uhhh........I'm looking for a better life. Please spare me. I just want some help." The girl then said, "Fine I'll let you stuck with me, but you will follow MY rules! Ok?!? The rules are no whinning and if you ever cross me, you'll die a very horrible and painful death." Sid said timidly, "Uhh....ok." The girl than said, "By the way, my name is Cassandra, but my friends call me Cass. But you are NOT my friend, so it's Cassandra to you. Alright?"So they
camped that night and Sid learned how Cassandra was captured by demons, but managed to escape. In the morning, Sid felt a lot better, even though the food was raw (Cass pregered it that way) and he had slept on a rock. A few days later, Cassandra and Sud were jumped. A boy, about Sid's age, tackled Sid and pointed a dagger toward his throat.Cassandra turned into a wolf and tackled the boy to the ground. Sid got up and approuched him. "Call the dog off! Call the dog off!" the boy said. Cass turned back into a human and backed off. The boy got up and said, "Now for a proper greeting." He stuck a hand toward Sid and said, "Hello, I'm Matt. And I'm srry I jumped you. Now can I please get some food?" Cass answered, "Whats in it for us and more importantly me?" Matt said, "Well I see you could use some help and I can help. As for both of you," He brought out two swords, "gifts from me to you." Sid accepted the sword, but Cass turned it down and Matt put it away. Matt then joined Sud and Cass and they traveled deeper into the woods.

 

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Chap 6uke

Duke walked into the palace of the Demon Lord. With it's obsidian walls and high turrets, the palace had a sort of nightmarish feel to it. Well then again, they are demons. Duke walked in and was greeted by the smirk of Errinshima, another one of the Demon Lords generals. "Nice beauty mark, Dukey." She said with a grin. Duke replied, "I don't want to talk about it. And for the last time, DON'T CALL ME DUKEY!" Errinshima backed off. Having enraged Duke, her work was done. Duke walked into the throne room. Portraits of evil were hanging on the walls, an sitting on the throne was the most terrifing being alive. His skin was a deep, blood red. His horns big enough to pierce even the most well crafted armors. Even his looks could kill smaller creatures. His name, unknown to most, was Terzar, the Demon Lord. Duke kneled before him an
said, "Sire, I have good news and bad news. The good news is my attacked the village of that hereoling and captured her. The bad news is that she escaped." Duke braced himself for the worst, but nothing could prepare him for the storm about to come. "WHAT?!?!?! I ASK YOU TO CAPTURE ONE MEASLY WEREWOLF! AND SHE ESCAPES! AND IS THAT GASH FROM HER TOO?!" Terzar asked furiosly. "Yes it is sire." Duke answered, "But I have a plan to capture her again. I just need the Hernics and I'll have her by the next moon." The Hernics were a group of elite warriors, trained in the forces of evil. "Fine, but on one condition. You must bring Errinshima with you. She never fails, like you do." Duke was shocked but agreed. Errinshima meet him outside the throneroom. "Alright! You have to accompany me to find the werewolf." Duke told her. "Fine, will do Captain Gash Head." Errinshima replied. Duke was angry, but held it in. They called the five Hernics and set off for the heroes

 

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