"The Death of Matthew McClain" FEEDBACK

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Ipitydahooka (01), Jul 9, 2010.

  1. Please put feedback here! Thank you! 
     
  2. I thought that was great dc! keep it coming!
     
  3. Great job! Looking forward to more!
     
  4. This was a very good story when iread it nice
     
  5. Thanks y'all I appreciate your support. I'm about to add more.
     
  6. Ok guys it's the moment you have all been waiting for. The day Matthew McClain is set to die. The aniticipation is killing me as much as it is killing him I'm sure. Lol. Stay tuned and keep your eyes opened for this tale's ending. It's something you won't want to miss. ;)
     
  7. So much suspence!!!
     
  8. I'm about to post the ending to "The Death of Matthew McClain". Read up and enjoy. ;)
     
  9. Just posted the end to my story.
     
  10. A little depressing at the end, but overall good job. Nice story.
     
  11. Well it is called "The Death of Matthew McClain".lol. Only so happy it can be. My next one will be different and more... Hopeful. Lol. But thank you!
     
  12. Lol, yw. And I'll keep an eye out for your next one.
     
  13. Thank you. I have been reading yours. I really like it. Lol. And my next one should be on sometime next week. This one didn't get read too much but i'm glad a few people enjoyed it.
     
  14. Thanks! Which story?

    And don't get discouraged. Sometimes people read without posting feedback, even though they still like it. I'm guilty of that. xD
     
  15. It's really imaginative and I like how it flows so easily. My favorite is Dash. Lol
     
  16. Thanks! Innocence is the one that I hope to get published. But I have some major editing to do, especially in the beggining.

    Dash was actually a character that another user signed up for. But he only gave me the name. I had to make up everything else. I'm glad you like it!
     
  17. Really emo but still good reminds me of Death Note