the darkness below

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by colin6589, May 14, 2012.

  1. I will start this story when people pick some characters for me to use that way it makes it more challenging for me
     


  2. Please, please for the love of mankind; die in a hole.
     
  3. You just created a thread.
    What's it about?
    Nothing.

    You just added more spam to FF.
    Thank you, DESTROY3r.
     
  4. No I want others to come up with characters for my story it makes it more fun and challenging for me
     
  5. And you did this by telling us NOTHING about the story?

    Congrats, you have sunk lower than the already extremely low rank of society that you come under.


    I stand by my early made statement.
     
  6. You don't need to know the story to give me a character and a background for them
     
  7. I can tell you aren't creative so go away.
     
  8. Well we do.

    We don't know what genre the story is.
    Or when it is based, you could be writing a story a cyborg in the future but I could think you writing about a medieval love story.

    See what a mean.
     
  9. @ParaWe don't need to know about the story to make characters.
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    Anyways Destroyer.....

    Name: Katherine Pryde
    "Kitty"
    Friends with Serena
    17
    And no other info but sisters with prim
    Father- Lord Talbern
    Mother- Selena (deceased)
    Sister- Solin
    Tilte: lady
    Knows Serena threw Solin

    Serena Karin
    "Saris"
    Friends with Kitty
    17
    Younger Sister of Lavendar
    Unknown mother and father


    Primrose Pryde
    "prim"
    13
    Sister of Solin and Kitty
    Not serena's friend but hangs around Serena
    Father- Lord Talbern
    Mother: deceased
    Title: "Lady"

    Solin Eveningrose Pryde
    "Sol"
    17
    Hates her nickname
    Prefers to be called Solin
    Sister of Prim and Kitty
    Friends with Serena
    Has known Serena a long time
    Daughter of lady Selena (deceased) and Lord Talbern
    Title: "Lady"

    Lavendar Rose Karin
    "Lav"
    Sister of Serena
    Friends with Solin
    14
    Unknown parents
     
  10. Ohhhh good good I'm getting an idea oh yes very good thanks katherine_pryde
    You should recognize me now as Colinaidas leader of the clan burning_fury
     
  11. Prologue

    This is the story of six friends and a fight for survival in a post-apocalyptic world. There are many dangers and something lurking in the darkness of the world below, where survivors live as the upper world is too radioactive from nuclear weapons and meltdowns alike. Five girls and one boy will face the toughest challenge ever and uncover the truth behind the apocalypse.

    Time: 5:59AM
    Date: June,6th
    Location: the new city of Detroit underground
    "where are we going Anthony?" Serena asked, "To wherever we can find weapons." replied Anthony in a hushed tone. "we've been looking for days." solin whined. "look!" exclaimed Anthony, "a weapon store. Let's go take a look inside but stick together who knows what could be in there."
    The six of them headed for the shop avoiding wide open space. Suddenly a mutant jumped out at Anthony and started attacking him! *Bang!*
     
  12. No. Just no.

    The mere idea of it makes me bang my head on the table and shudder. Seriously. It's unoriginal. Don't. Use. The. Apocalypse. Unless you can actually pull it off, and you use it in a CREATIVE way.
     
  13. CONGRATULATIONS 


















    You fail
     
  14. Punctuation, use it.
    Grammar, use it.
    Common sense, use it.

    Get the **** out of Fan Fiction and KaW.
     
  15. You dare insult me with words your puny cerebellums cannot comprehend! Here's a thought you get the **** out of ff! Get the **** out of my story and don't talk to someone who is your intellectual superior so rudely! I have not been disrespectful to you but I'm not going to let this be insulted in the prologue you don't even have a thousandth of the story or it's details! You won't give it a chance because you know nothing! You might like it but you'll never know if you don't give it a chance!
     
  16. Wow just wow.
    Did you get those insults from your mummy and daddy?
    Or maybe your abusive other family told you them.

    You dare tell ME to get the **** out of FF? You cannot comprehend the the backslap your face would be feeling right now.

    Intellectual superior, big words from such a small man. You're arrogance and ignorant ways are unbelievable.
    Back on the point of "intellectual supremacy" you can hardly punctuate a story let alone hold any kind of intellectual supremacy, your utilisation of enormous idioms doesn't reflect knowledge.
     
  17. No your right but an iq of 211 does
     
  18. Intellect and knowledge are vastly different. Being someone's intellectual superior doesn't require you to have a broad vocabulary.

    An extensive vocabulary doesn't reflect knowledge either. Use a 'big' word when it fits, not to be arrogant and to show off. Cramming long words into little sentences shows that you have to put effort into impressing someone, and usually that kind of attempt isn't impressive.

    The fact that you have knowledge of words doesn't mean you can use them properly.

    Your insults, 'suggestions,' and your very words make little sense, because you're forcing the purple prose. Forced purple prose is painful to read. Simplicity is your friend.
     
  19. IQ tests are, for the most part, only a judge on a small branch of intellectual ability; usually mathematical skill and computation speed.

    There are a multitude of different intelligences. Getting a high score on one test doesn't guarantee a high score on all of them.
     
  20. Paradox may be weaker than you in one area, but you are most likely much weaker in every other area, because of the fact that you are apparently so strong in one.