The Dark-Ones feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Tantilus, Aug 15, 2010.

  1. Post feed back ere. Chapter 1 and 2 are out.
     
  2. I like them but they r rlly too short


    Make the reader bored
     
  3. Yeah bjorn
     
  4. A bit short, but the cliff hangers at the end are very interesting.
     
  5. These are the chapters how they meet up. It will get longer.
     
  6. Oh. Well in that case, good start!
     
  7. Ok get them to meet today and start lengthening chaptures
     
  8. I like it, but it's a little short๎• oh well! Keep up the good work!๎•
     
  9. Chapter 6 is out and it's longer
     
  10. Nice Job on chp 6
     
  11. I'm so epic Luke FTW!!!!






    And u spelled wield wrong
     
  12. Chapter 7 is out. It is a filler till I get 8 out :)
     
  13. Cool beans. I can't wait!
     
  14. Chapter 8 is out
     
  15. YAY!๎•
     
  16. Awww I got my butt kicked...HOPE WILL PAY DEARLY IN BLACKWIND FOR THIS! jkjk lol good chapter
     
  17. Good job on chapter eight!๎•
     
  18. I lie it bit Lue gets no action




    He coulda PWNED utho