The Dark Army: Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iPimella (01), Jul 9, 2010.

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  1. Please help me improve my writing by giving me constructive critisism. If you like it and wish to compliment it thats fine too :)
     
    #1 *iPimella (01), Jul 9, 2010
  2. Very nice no need for critcizem here!!
     
    #2 mathew057, Jul 10, 2010
  3. Plz post more!!!
     
    #3 mathew057, Jul 10, 2010
  4. 2nd Chapter is up, 3rd coming soon
     
    #4 *iPimella (01), Jul 14, 2010
  5. Agree with mat. Nice story! Glad to have you on the team!
     
    #5 Bastion, Jul 14, 2010
  6. Ty bastion 
     
    #6 *iPimella (01), Jul 14, 2010
  7. Nice new chapter
     
    #7 mathew057, Jul 14, 2010
  8. Np. 
     
    #8 Bastion, Jul 15, 2010
  9. 3rd chapter up
     
    #9 *iPimella (01), Jul 21, 2010
  10. I love it! It's really classy!
     
    #10 *Irin (01), Jul 21, 2010
  11. Thanks :D That means a lot to a writing noob like me
     
    #11 *iPimella (01), Jul 21, 2010
  12. Your not a writing noob at all. Your writing has really good quality.
     
    #12 *Irin (01), Jul 21, 2010
  13. 4th chapter up. This is my last for the night.
     
    #13 *iPimella (01), Jul 21, 2010
  14. Nice chapter!!!
     
    #14 mathew057, Jul 21, 2010
  15. Really good!
     
    #15 *Irin (01), Jul 21, 2010
  16. 5th Chapter up, this ones a boring one, bear with me here :D
     
    #16 *iPimella (01), Jul 23, 2010
  17. Still nice chapter....
     
    #17 mathew057, Jul 23, 2010
  18. 6th chapter up
     
    #18 *iPimella (01), Jul 28, 2010
  19. Cool enough to post inforums but not talk with me in cc...
     
    #19 -Crim-, Jul 28, 2010
  20. What Crim?
     
    #20 *iPimella (01), Jul 28, 2010
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