"The Cult of Kabthal" Feedback Thread

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Ipitydahooka (01), Jan 27, 2011.

  1. So this is the long overdue sequal to "The Maid of Ycha". I hope you guys enjoy it and please post all feedback and criticisms here. Not on the story. Thanks y'all.
     
  2. Awesome and intense first chapter!
     
  3. Oh my God is he ok?