The Companions...

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Narwhal, Dec 8, 2013.

  1. I'm really bored, so I decided to write a story... and I suck at writing stories :D


    Prologue


    There once was a kingdom known as Fangdar. Some say it was the mightiest kingdom, to others, just another civilization. Yet, it holds a story of a few friends that changed the world forever.

    Our story begins in a small cozy inn where our “heroes” are telling stories about their adventures. There is a mage, 2 rangers, an axman and a swordsman. They’re just a bunch of warriors, mercenaries, but over all else, friends, and the one-thing that holds them together most, is their lust for adventure. Now that you know more about our warriors, you may want to know their names, our mage is an female elf named Glandria, our rangers are both men(race), a man named Sedric, the other a woman named Talia, our axman is an elf named Gailon, and finally, we have our man (race) swordsman, Cirion.


    Chapter 1

    Our companions are still chatting away when an old man walks over to the table, in a low-pitched voice, “I hear you fellows are looking for an adventure.” All of our friends stop to here what the old man has to say.
    “If you are up for the task, a lost evil is locked away in a far away temple, an evil that can bring darkness over our land.”
    “But, what’s in it for us?” asks our axman.
    “Well, glory, over everything else, yet, this temple holds unknown secrets you may be able to find useful.”
    “Well, let’s get on with it!” says our eager swordsman.
    “Settle down young lad, this is not an easy task, your weapons and armor are weak, I recommend you go to the elven forge in Deloria. Tell them I sent you.”
    “And who are you exactly?” asked Talia.
    “I am Reffinder, Protector of the Gold Tower, you may have heard of me, but no questions, I must make haste, and you do too.”

    The man quickly got up and left the inn, our heroes followed him, but when they got outside, he was nowhere to be found, and no horse was found nearby. There was a note on the ground that read

    “Quickly, this evil is growing, if you do not know where Deloria is, follow the path to the left for a mile then take a right. I left you some horses near the stables. I am depending on you to complete this task, make haste now.”
     
  2. Is there a feedback thread? Sorry if there is>_>

    You said you suck at writing stories. I really like this actually:D seems interesting
     
  3. This story sucks .... really badly
     
  4. I seem to remember someone calling ME mean...

    Oh and,

    " by ANGEL-OF-WAR on Mon Dec 02, 2013 10:15 am There were just too many mean people ..." ( Out of context. This was you logically thinking too many mean people are on Fan Fiction. )

    Hypocrite.
     
  5. Ive been changed @_@