The Choice Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Sunclaw, Feb 9, 2014.

  1. Please post feedback for "The Choice" here! Thanks
     
    #1 Sunclaw, Feb 9, 2014
  2. very curious to see where this goes, and well written! good job
     
    #2 WizardTrust, Feb 9, 2014
  3. Made my eyes tear up :( Very nicely written, I'm interested!
     
    #3 mindlessinterest, Feb 11, 2014
  4. The prologue was so deep I thought I would drown.
     
    #4 Dragonite, Feb 16, 2014
  5. That was ridiculously good. Eyes kinda watered. Few spelling mistakes but honestly if you keep trying to go deep with the emotion you have the potential to turn it into a real tear jerker
     
    #5 darlin700, Feb 18, 2014
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