You know the drill. No posting and blah, blah, blah. Yes, I'll make a feedback thread. No I won't be canceling Broken. Here's the summary thingamabob. My name? I'm not so sure if I should tell you that. You see, you might turn me in. But maybe that's inevitable anyway.... Alright, so my name is Arria. Ironicly, it means 'Gold-Hunter.' But don't call me that. No one calls me that anymore. Instead, I'm known as The Bounty Huntress. Why? It's not too hard to figure out. I kill people. I guess this is where I'm supposed to tell you why in a nutshell. But you won't understand if I do. How can I possibly explain everything that's happend to me since the day they caught my father to the day I found him in just a few words? I can't. So either turn away now and forget everything you've read, or keep reading. But whatever you do, keep your lips sealed. I'll have to kill you if you don't.
You contradict yourself multiple times, and it's boring. This story won't keep an audience entertained nor will you give them anything worth reading. I know you said not to post, but I thought you could use some positive feedback.
I...made...a Feedback page. Now I have to redo the whole thing... Ah well...feedback much appreciated. On the feedback thread.