This is my first fan fic plz enjoy!!! ()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()() It was a dark night,the moon shone brightly over the DDE castle,when a dark figure appeared in the courtyard. ???:Here I go,time to join the DEE army. The figure disappears in a flash off light The king was in the thrown room with his best men and his queen Queen: my king, do u just see a bright light? King: no my queen,it must of been your imagination,as you were saying Horas Horas:yes sir,the guards have spotted a giant boar on the edge of our la... He was interrupted my the doors of the thrown room being slammed open
Please, proofread. There's a huge number of typos, grammar mistakes, and all around stupid issues with this. Also, your sentences are too short and choppy; it sounds more like a little kid's scribbling than a "volume".