I was born into the safety of a peaceful nursery, warm milk scents always keeping me at ease. I was about two moons old when I met my father for the first time. BoneClan was a peaceful clan, but SharpStar took over and changed his name to DeathStar. DeathStar was my father. I could hardly hear them, because many kits were playing in the nursery. I pricked my ears, to catch what DeathStar was saying to my mother. "When she's three moons old," he began. "I want her to be my apprentice. The other two are too weak to train, but Maplekit is much stronger." My mother flashed me a worried glance. "But it would stunt her growth," she said quietly, making up excuses so that I would not have to live a dangerous life for many moons to come. So I could live in comfort. DeathStar whispered something into her ear, and she gave a small nod of defeat. "I see," she murmured, unwillingly. "I will prepare her." That one moon passed quicker than I expected. All that time, I had to eat solid meat, not even softened for me. DeathStar entered the nursery, eyes full of pride. "Mapleki- I mean MaplePAW, are you ready to enter the excitement of a young warrior? I nodded slowly, and we raced out of camp to a clearing. "We will practice fighting first," DeathStar began. "You never know when a fight breaks out." If I forgot to mention, BoneClan is a very hated clan, and we fought often. Mostly over prey or expanding borders. But we were strong, and that's not a bad thing to proud of, right? DeathStar leapt at me, claws extended. Apprentices didn't practice like this! "ALWAYS pay attention!" he snapped. Hearing a quiet rustle of the dry bushes, I whipped my head around. Several cats from RockClan burst into the clearing, tails kinked high over their backs. And in that very instant, all hell broke loose.
love it ! cept SharpStar/DeathStar ur father in the story sounds a bit like BrokenStar, son of RaggedStar and YellowFang and who killed RaggedStar in the warriors series but i like cats like that