@belle you captured much of my essence. but not all. there is much still unknown to you young one. but your story was superb. I hope you expand on this story. I'm excited to know more about the characters!
Well, being one who writes about KaW at midnight, just about to fall asleep, I won't say my writing is topnotch. This was pretty damn good, though. Then again, maybe it has something to do with the fact you have a major in creative writing.
Nice. Whats the fastest way to bother you so you can finish it? I didn't read it all but it looked extremely promising. It could very well become my favorite fanfic piece besides a finished endgame which will probably never happen.
1 thing, make more paragraphs. Sometimes its more enjoyable to read a story when its separated and its less of an eyestrain... Otherwise well written. And if u did do paragraphs, on the ipod u have to hit the return button twice.