The Arena: Signups and Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iPimella (01), Jan 17, 2011.

  1. Click Here for the The Arena

    In the midst of a beautiful city of shining glass lies a tall stone monster. It's high stone walls cast dark shadows on the buildings that surround it, and looks terribly out of place among the beautiful modern architecture. Despite its ugliness, the citizens of the city wouldn't tear it down for all the money in the world. In a peaceful world, The Colosseum is the only place to enjoy the brutality left behind long ago.

    In this new world, such violence and abuse has been outlawed. Unfortunately, the creatures fighting within are not technically humans, and therefore don't have any rights to protect them. They are created in a lab as a fetus, and their genetic code is tweaked to perfection. They are born, and the next fifteen to twenty years of their lives are devoted to training their bodies and their minds for battle, not just against eachother, but against animals and monsters. Finally, they are paired with another person who they will eat sleep and fight with to the death. If they manage to survive longer than all of the other pairs, they are sent to live in the Victory Village- a place where they will live in peace the rest of their lives.

    So--- This is a preview to the new story that DarkFalcon and I are co-writing!!! Yay! We will need around 20 characters (maybe more) to be the opposing teams. Also, we are giving people a new option! If you do not wish to write a character, or character making is closed, you can create a monster! We need around 5-10 monsters.

    What we need for Characters


    Name: Please make it interesting- and give them a last name please
    Gender: Male or female ONLY
    Age: 15-20
    Appearance: The more detailed the better
    Personality: THIS IS NOT A BIO just say if they're determined shy ect. traits, not a story
    Weapon of Choice: Just because this is they're weapon of choice, doesn't mean they will always use it. No guns or modern weapons please. If you use these they will be disregarded.
    Special Ability: Do not make your character invincible. They probably will die in the course of the story. Sorry :(
    Also DO NOT MAKE BIOS FOR YOUR CHARACTERS If you do, they will be disregarded.

    What we need for monsters


    Name of the Species: Again- make it interesting
    Appearance:
    Personality: How it acts is it agressive? scared? constantly hungry?
    Abilities: Can it burrow? Can it jump really high? Don't make it over powered, like I said before it will probably die during the course of the battle.
    Weaknessess: Give it at least one, maybe two

    Note: The monster has to be original- No copy cats :D


    So there you have it.

    Go crazy :p. By the way, you can make 1 character OR 1 monster. :mrgreen:
     
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    GLOOMI!!!!!
     
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    Sorry hit submit early

    Name: Dresmond Urlto
    Age: 19
    Personality: talkative, flirts alot
    Weapon: a short handmade blade that attaches to a gauntlet (no other word I can think of lol) on his right wrist
    Power: can heat up whatever he touches to very high temperatures
     
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    Monster

    Raz'ak

    Cloaked, can't see body, only a massive beak can be seen

    Super fast, silent, can jump very high and perfect assassin

    Weakness
    Sunlight burns and have to give blood offerings otherwise power decreases...

    Very aggressive and hostile, hunts in twos
     
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    Dammit
    Gender: male
     
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    Appearance GI?
     
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    And Story Writer- THe monster has to be original :?
     
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    This is kind of a mix of The Mercenary and The Colosseum
     
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    I know...
     
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    How is it like the mercenary? And it is a lot like the colosseum, but me and dark were planning this before she posted it, so we aren't plagerizing or anything. Unlike writing a story by yourself- co writing takes A LOT of organization. This took around a month to a month and a half to plan.
     
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    This is DarkFalcon's bio:

    Name: Kantos
    Appearance: Has black hair and wears a dark red robe with red lining.
    Weapon: 2 Katanas and various throwing knives
    Ability: Superhuman speed and reflexes
     
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    I didn't say u plagiarized,
    In the Mercenary they had pairs which had to fight the other groups and those pair had to eat,sleep,and drink together
     
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    Mine won't post!!!
     
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    Name: Roxanna
    Gender: Female
    Age: 15
    Appearance: Long black hair with red highlights, Red eyes, small sharp eyebrows, dark clothes are favourite...
    Bio: born into chaos, father killed mother and raped Roxanna when drunk, she left at age of 13 to live a new life.
    Weapon: Bow and arrow, short sword
    Power: Telephatic, read minds and control people, shots pure energy at people, leaves her open as she can't move when using power...
     
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    Damn knew something missing I'm having an off day :(

    Appearance: black hair, red eyes(from mutations), thin leather shirt and black jeans/pants, has a gauntlet like contraption on right wrist and a cross necklace
     
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    Story writer?

    Having her control people and read minds would cause her to be overpowered. Choose 1 
     
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    But their is one major flaw, she can't move...
     
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    Err can't really b disagreeing with author seeing as she's kinda writing it

    Btw where did falcon go haven't seen him in awhile
     
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    Fine, mind reading... *grumble grumble*
     
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    Hey gloomi if u need monsters ask delphin he's pretty creative with that stuff