One day there was this lonesome wanderer named Jay Money. He was packing up and heading off for today when he ran into a stranger. "Who are you?" Jay asked. "I Am Irkan" said the stranger. They then started walking together, and talking. They got to know each other better and decided to team up. They got in arguments quite a bit, and they got in a few fist fights, but overall they were still best friends. While they were walking someone snuck up behind them, and he successfully stole Jay's wallet, but he failed to steal Irkan's. Irkan turned around and punched him "He's a hybrid." Irkan said. Later, they asked him who he was, he said "They call me Fanbat.". "I'm the most deepest person in this whole city, braaahs! Can I join you guys?" "Sure!" said Jay. Irkan didn't like this idea, but let him come along anyway. While they were walking Fanbat started to talk about this girl back home that he loves. "Her name is Nikki. I love her so much! 'She's beautiful, nice, smart, funny, and good smelling.'". He kept talking about how great she is. About an hour away from the old city they run into a person named qwerty. He's a very nice guy who let us all join a clan he's in named .ALPHA. It turns out that the oener's name is Enyce, and he's not as nice as qwerty is. That evening Fanbat was looking at the blueskynight. Its beauty reminds him of Nikki. It would be perfect if it weren't for all the fatKids running around, playing with the cash-dispencer.
One thing immediately made me not want to read this - the lack of paragraphs/breaks. Consider revising your OP to make it less like a block of words and more like a progression of thoughts. Funniest part was about the "good smelling Nikki."