The allience feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Sep 1, 2010.

  1. Hey everyone, how do you like my story so far, good and bad reviews are both welcome! Thanks!
     
    #1 *lady-marian (01), Sep 1, 2010
  2. It's awesome, I'm getting an idea who Josie is (hope I spelt that right).
     
    #2 WW1225, Sep 1, 2010
  3. You spelt it right, thanks!!! 
     
    #3 *lady-marian (01), Sep 1, 2010
  4. 
     
    #4 *lady-marian (01), Sep 1, 2010
  5. Looks like it's gonna b good muy bueno chica
     
    #5 german_idiot, Sep 1, 2010
  6. Spelled "alliance" wrong
     
    #6 Tidalwave-TS, Sep 1, 2010
  7. Sweet! Lol, wasn't sure, my spelling is almost always horrible
     
    #7 WW1225, Sep 1, 2010
  8. Awwww man! I hate spelling things wrong!. But I guess it's ok. 
     
    #8 *lady-marian (01), Sep 2, 2010
  9. Ignoreing my spelling errors, how is the story, the characters, the plot, the dialouge... Etc.?
     
    #9 *lady-marian (01), Sep 2, 2010
  10. Bump!
     
    #10 *lady-marian (01), Sep 2, 2010
  11. Bump!
     
    #11 *lady-marian (01), Sep 2, 2010
  12. It was good :)
     
    #12 *Symphoney (01), Sep 2, 2010
  13. Thnks
     
    #13 *lady-marian (01), Sep 3, 2010
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