The Agent feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by german_idiot, Dec 2, 2010.

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  1. Thnx for reading and tell me what ya think
     
    #1 german_idiot, Dec 2, 2010
  2. Sounds great so far!;)
     
    #2 *lady-marian (01), Dec 2, 2010
  3. Thnx lady
     
    #3 german_idiot, Dec 2, 2010
  4. Brilliant!!plz continue
     
    #4 Shadow_4920, Dec 3, 2010
  5. I want more!
     
    #5 *RustyRuler (01), Dec 3, 2010
  6. When will the next part be posted?
     
    #6 *Caliber (02), Dec 3, 2010
  7. Sounds pretty good so far.
    Seth
     
    #7 seth73, Dec 3, 2010
  8. Very interesting! Please continue!
     
    #8 Storallelite, Dec 3, 2010
  9. Looking good so far. When's the next addition?
     
    #9 *Gen_Spartan (01), Dec 3, 2010
  10. Hopefully tonite and tomorrow gotta go hunting so it'll b late tomorrow
     
    #10 german_idiot, Dec 3, 2010
  11. Good but i find it racist a little bit
     
    #11 MasterSlayerALi, Dec 3, 2010
  12. WTF how's it rascist
     
    #12 german_idiot, Dec 3, 2010
  13. It's not racist. Don't get PC. As far as I see it doesn't mention whites, blacks, Hispanics, etc.
     
    #13 *Gen_Spartan (01), Dec 3, 2010
  14. I want the next part to be out now. 
     
    #14 *RustyRuler (01), Dec 3, 2010
  15. You forgot the Mossad and M16
     
    #15 Fangedwolf, Dec 4, 2010
  16. It's just a prolouge wolf lol don't worry I'll put more detail in tomorrow for some reason it didn't load my next chapter on the story thread and I didn't save it so yeah I'm pissed
     
    #16 german_idiot, Dec 4, 2010
  17. Tomorrow?
     
    #17 *Caliber (02), Dec 4, 2010
  18. Yep.....tomorrow.......late..............sorry
     
    #18 german_idiot, Dec 4, 2010
  19. Wait before you put anything with the M16, know that it is not used in urban combat. That's the M4.
     
    #19 *Gen_Spartan (01), Dec 4, 2010
  20. New chapter up for all u midnite creatures
     
    #20 german_idiot, Dec 4, 2010
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