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So post anything related to my story here! Criticism welcome; I'm always looking for ways to improve!

 

Thanks! Interesting is good, right?

 

Thanks, and she is a vampire-werewolf-angel hybrid, so yes, she has the qualities of all three.

 

Thanks! And is interesting good or not? Or is interesting what makes your brain work hard? Or does interesting make you predict what will happen? Or do you say interesting because there's nothing else to say?

 

Chapter one is out, I have set the stage for chapter two! I'm excited for chapter two! Only I haven't written it yet...

 

Yup, that was your character!

 

No, but I started with him. The girl is the main character.

 

Yes... What?

 

Oh, okay