Terror by Twins feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *TonyVoltage5 (01), Jun 17, 2011.

  1. Hello. I'm new 2 fan fiction but I hope u'll give me sum helpful tips and ideas. My story is mainly sci-fy with a few PG-13 references. Have a nice read!
     
    #1 *TonyVoltage5 (01), Jun 17, 2011
  2. Hmmm... interesting...

    Can't wait for more :)
     
    #2 FeatherHunter, Jun 17, 2011
  3. Chapter 2 is the main start of PG-13 references
     
    #3 *TonyVoltage5 (01), Jun 17, 2011
  4. Can't wait for more!!!
     
    #4 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 18, 2011
  5. I will start posting my chapters by using my alt. I will create the alt l8r today.
     
    #5 *TonyVoltage5 (01), Jun 18, 2011
  6. I'm sry I took so long. I was on vacation in a no wifi zone :/ I will make my alt and post chapter 1 today after I get back from the dreadful beach my mom is dragging me to.
     
    #6 *TonyVoltage5 (01), Jun 27, 2011
  7. ...
     
    #7 FeatherHunter, Jun 27, 2011
  8. My alt is WhiteHawk1 but having trouble logging into fanfic.
     
    #8 *TonyVoltage5 (01), Jun 28, 2011
  9. ...OK
     
    #9 FeatherHunter, Jun 28, 2011
  10. Ok so my plan isn't working that well. So I will use my original 2 continue the story.
     
    #10 *TonyVoltage5 (01), Jul 2, 2011
  11. Finally.
     
    #11 FeatherHunter, Jul 2, 2011
  12. Ok, so my plan went wrong. I myself as TonyVoltage5 will continue the story.
     
    #12 *TonyVoltage5 (01), Jul 2, 2011
  13. I am personally sorry to those who have been waiting for my story to continue. I'm thinking of making the story on a personally designed website to make it more interesting. Once again I am sorry for any and all inconveniences. If I am cleared to I will make a different story based on Ryan Snake(please read School Drama before so)
     
    #13 *TonyVoltage5 (01), Oct 16, 2011
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