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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Weeblez, Feb 7, 2014.

  1. once i was lost b4 night turned to dayno one would
    help me so i found my own wayoutcast shall i be,
    nevermore will you knowthis me that was i, now a
    hidden shadowi was found by the light that the
    dakness cant hide......even pitch black the light can
    confidebut in the darkness ill stand now hid from
    the lightthis shadowless shade, i belong to the
    nightyou brought this upon me abhoration i
    seenabated by all, im not what i seemthat was me
    on the cliff standing so tallface to the sky ready to
    fallpassersby kept on passing as if nothing were
    therejust give me a nudge my head was in
    prayerbut nothing had happened time had grew
    oldi got tired of standing my knees would soon
    foldbut something had stopped me from dropping
    beneathmy heart was too strong, or my balls were
    too weaknothing could stop me except me on my
    own,the dark is my light, which now is my homenot
    much light now around me, the sunset so dimnow
    the darkness surrounds me, as dark as my grinthe
    darkness had shown me jump if i maydeath will
    befall me, night turns to daymeaning why should i
    do this everything else will stayday turns to night
    and night into day
     
  2. Punctuation. It exists.
     
  3. I struggled through the poem, and it's pretty good.

    But please, PLEASE fix the capitalization, spaces, and punctuation.