Taken Away - FEEDBACK

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 12, 2011.

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  1. Here you can post feedback for my story "Taken Away" :)
     
    #1 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 12, 2011
  2. I love the story already! Good beginning!!!!
     
    #2 *EYESOFBLUE (01), Jul 12, 2011
  3. Thanks a lot
     
    #3 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 12, 2011
  4. Welcome! :)
     
    #4 *EYESOFBLUE (01), Jul 12, 2011
  5. Awesome
     
    #5 Allioss, Jul 12, 2011
  6. Thanks to you too 
     
    #6 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 12, 2011
  7. Nice start!

    If that's the Raul who I think he is then the main character's in trouble
     
    #7 *-SoulReaper- (01), Jul 12, 2011
  8. Hahah... Perhaps you're right
    Thanks 
     
    #8 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 12, 2011
  9. Lol. Keep up the good work!
     
    #9 *-SoulReaper- (01), Jul 12, 2011
  10. Wow! It's great!
     
    #10 Storallelite, Jul 12, 2011
  11. Thanks a lot
     
    #11 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 12, 2011
  12. It's good so far great job 
     
    #12 PrincessElf, Jul 13, 2011
  13. Thanks 
     
    #13 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 13, 2011
  14. Next chapter tomorrow (or today if I have the time) 
     
    #14 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 13, 2011
  15. The story is awesome! Can't wait until chapter 2!

















    Annnndddddd when my character comes in (if he does)
     
    #15 RenamedPhoenix, Jul 13, 2011
  16. It'll take some time before your character comes, but I found the perfect place for him :)
     
    #16 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 14, 2011
  17. New chapter soon? :s
     
    #17 Allioss, Jul 16, 2011
  18. Sorry for no chapter, but I wasn't happy with the chapter. I was going to finish it tomorrow and post it, but I'm going away for a week. No Internet  To make up for it, TWO chapters on Saturday or Sunday 
    I hope you'll understand.
     
    #18 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 17, 2011
  19. New chapter up now!
     
    #19 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 23, 2011
  20. Nice!
     
    #20 Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011
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