Sword of Death: Race Against Time

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SilverEmerald (01), Jan 29, 2013.

  1. Hey guys, this will be the sequel to my first two stories. It's rather short, planned for 10 chapters only. At this stage, there are 5 days left until the world in which Lisa comes from is destroyed. (If you don't know who I'm talking about, read Sword of Death and Neuroxandia first). I'll try to get the first chapter up soon. Although my stories suck, for those of you that like it, sorry for the wait
     
  2. Yayyyy I've been waiting or this.
     
  3. Day 1 of 5: Chapter 1: Part 1

    The first rays of sunlight broke through the dark grey storm clouds of the night. I opened my eyes. Blurry at first. Then my vision cleared. I was in the former Empire of China, now known as the Republic of Eastern Asia. I remembered Grace from my brief visit to another world. Lisa had been there too. The entire continent was destroyed there. Looking around, I saw a temple in the distance. No time for religious activities now. I had the Sword of Heaven, as I called it. It was the one thing that could end this. In 5 days, my world will be destroyed. I had 5 days to reach the capital of the Commonwealth Empire. The smallest step begins the greatest journey. Mines has just begun.

    Lisa had plagued the world with monsters. Many fell prey. The monsters stole life force from humans. But as all things in the world, they had an opposite. Very rare were Conatian Purifiers. They came from another dimension long ago. They have the ability to defeat these monsters, and to heal those who fell prey to the monsters. The Conatian council was formed. They sent out teams to hold off the monsters. They were recognized by the necklace with a lapis lazuli cross. If they were defeated by the monsters, the cross would turn red. I saw a girl in the distance with a blue cross. She was rapidly losing ground. To a red cross.

    Day 1 of 5: Chapter 1: Part 2:

    I was fighting a losing battle. The disappearance of the Conatian council's best knight was solved at least. I defended from strikes seemingly coming from every angle at the same time.

    I'm going to die, I thought.

    Well let me tell you a bit about myself. My name is Amber. I'm quite tall for a girl. When I joined the Conatian council, I did well with the bow. Not so much with the sword. So that is to be my downfall.

    I believed I was going to die. Until I see the boy behind my adversary.
     
  4. Sorry, my bad. Planned for 5 chapters, each chapter with two parts each.
     
  5. Minor setback with a factory reset of my iPhone. And I lost access to SilverEmerald account -.-
     
  6. Day 2 of 5: Chapter 2: Part 1

    Disposing of the dead body of the red crossed purifier, I turned to leave.

    "Wait!", the girl said.

    I turned. "What?"

    "Who are you? Are you a Purifier?"

    "Who I am is hardly relevant to what I'm doing. You Conatians don't even look at the big picture. The source of all this."

    "The source? I've only heard rumors of a girl with power stronger than a god's"

    "That'd be her"

    "It's suicidal to take her on"

    "I've known her for years. This was her true form, but I can still change it"

    "Let me go with you"

    "No. A mere Purifier can't hope to challenge her."

    Severely annoyed now, I used my power to warp to the next point. I was now in Kiruna, Sweden in the territory that England conquered centuries ago.

    And there Lisa was. She was sitting on a bench. I approached her. She looks at me. She looks at me and I recognize the side of her she wants to be. The good side.


    Day 2 of 5: Chapter 2: Part 2

    Here I was, standing. The boy that saved my life had spoken of a source if this plague. I had heard only rumors of the source being a girl. The girl seemed to be a sore point for the boy to discuss. He teleported somewhere else. He was not a Purifier. He was something else. Something more powerful
     
  7. Bump. Still working on next chapter.
     
  8. Delayed due to schedule conflicts with my personal life
     
  9. Ok I give up cuz it doesn't seem like anyone's reading it and no one is giving any feedback.