Swept into the Red Sea - Poem

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -IIXII-AJ-IIXII-, Aug 25, 2014.

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    Swept into the Red Sea


    Blood slowly rolling down my face.

    How did I end up in this god awful place? The rain coming down in torrents, my hair violently swept across my face. My red, magnificent, mace thrashed against the floor. I stand before you unguarded. I feel as if I'm knocking on Hells door. His dazzling soulreaper glinting, impending doom it swore. Fine cuts made in the air. A sudden gasp, I crumple to the floor.

    Death seizes another warrior. One of many sent to slaughter. A field of mixed blood and water... So this is where blood rain was born.
     
  2. Host note's

    I like this one for the references. Equipment, Blood rains and EE.
    It reminds me of a solider in EE fighting a more powerful enemy.

    Good Work!
     
  3. This is a pretty cool poem I love it  good job to whomever wrote this and best of luck in KWC

    ~Abyss
     
  4. Honestly, this is so good, it deserves money. Like real money. If this person wrote a book of poems like these, I would pay 100 bucks for it. Sheer amazing.
     
  5. Im speechless because it was so good
     
  6. Ikr. I seriously hope this wins.
     
  7. I give ownership to Loveandrea
     
  8. Is this where I vote? This one is amazing
     
  9. Poems aren't being voted on anymore, stories are.

    viewtopic.php?f=8&t=167219
     
  10. Nice poem love very good
     
  11. Very nice dre