Uh, Hi!!! I'm new to KaW l, but some of you may know me from PiMD... immediately so yeah, this may suck... Comment, criticize, and of course read! Enjoy. NOTE: THIS IS A SHINEE FABRICATION, A FABRICATION ABOUT A KOREAN BOYBAND >///< ΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠ Karis POV "But- J-Just give me two weeks! I promise you that I can bring in more customers!" I practically whined, my boss glared at me and yelled "I've already given you a month Kari! A damn month!" His cigarette breath wafted near my nose and I almost gagged, tears welling up in my eyes, threatening to spill out. "Now out! Now!" I nodded meekly and grabbed my box of things, making sure to slam the door on the way out. °°°°A week later°°°° It had been a week since I was fired and now I was at home, cleaning, when there was series of loud bangs and kicks from the door. I put down the broom and went over, looking through the peephole. There stood 3 buff angry looking men, tapping their feet and cigarettes hanging from their fat lips. My eyes widened and I opened the door weakly. "When do we get our money, woman?!" The largest guy to the right asked, stepping towards me fiercely as I backed up. °°°°A half hour later°°°° I stood in the rain, soaking wet, boxes and bags surrounding me. I sat down and sobbed loudly, since the street had been deserted once the heavy rain started to fall. I didn't care whether my butt got soaked or if my stuff got soaked. I could only think of how shitty my life was and why I ended up like this. No home. No money. No nothing. I sighed. Another mishap...
32/100 Not very fond of the "One week later" or the "half an hour later". Ending was bad, though you briefly had detail, and when there was detail, it was good.