Supernatural Heart - sign up feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *PythonX (01), Sep 27, 2010.

  1. Welcome ppl I'm starting to get bored of other ppls story genre so I'm going to start my own tale off excitement post your chracters details like this:

    Name:
    Age:
    Gender:
    appearance:
    Personallity:
    Powers:

    thx
     
  2. What's it about
     
  3. I'll start off

    Name:Dasken
    Age:28
    gender:male
    appearance:White hair, Black cape, Red shirt, Grey trousers
    Personallity: dull, creepy, curious, cunning, silent...etc.
    Powers:Smell, Infrared sight, strength, speed...etc.
    Info: almost a full werewolf
     
  4. It's like Twilight/Malvel comics
     
  5. This is my first story in 9 months plz sign up
     
  6. Name: Cyan
    Age: 16
    Gender: Female
    Appearance: Cyan colored eyes, black hair that does to her back, wears shirt skirts, boots, and an embroidered white shirt
    Personallity: Seductive, sarcastic, bad girl
    Powers: Convince any person to do anything, manipulate water
     
  7. Name: jordan
    age: 19
    gender: girl
    apearance: straight, long, brown hair, brown eyes, pretty.
    Personality: smart, good at multi tasking, sarcastic, always confident.
    Powers: photographic memory, night vision
     
  8. What color is cyan
     
  9. its a bluesih color.
     
  10. Here's a teaser in one of the scenes


    I ran deeper and deeper into the forest trieing to escape from my fears, the antidote was doing it's job.
    'Argghhrrrrrr...' the pain was really striking at my heels as if lightning slashed at my rear side, I missed her... She was like heaven for me but sacraficing myself for her life, this is feeling like hell!
     
  11. Name:Matt
    Age:18
    Gender:male
    Powers:can generate electricity through hands but cat figure out how to shoot it at people
    Bio:just started controlling his powers, he has also took combat lessons to be deadlier in a fight
    Side:good I guess






    Ps: don't let a gay vampire bite him
     
  12. Lol I need an evil vampire lord too
     
  13. Gay vampire lol @ German idiot
     
  14. Name:Ilkar
    Gender:Malr
    Appearance:dark brown eyes, black hair, jeans, black t-shirt
    Personality:Humorous, jokes around even if he is in a serious time
    Power: Able to find out anything just by looking at it once also can communicate with animals
     
  15. Wtf can u be a vampire
     
  16. I'm changing age to age:21
     
  17. Um what does vampire do??? I'm curious.
     
  18. Forgot age.

    Age:16
     
  19. U wud be like overlord speak with animals suck blood be bad guy...