Josh is alone in this world except for the girl he loved. He lives at the academy being trained to find "the orbs" their filled with energy that can power cities for months. He is walking on the surface world looking for them now. He sees one but who's that? It's a queens soldier he can't let him get it. "Stop right now leave or I use force." The kid who's around his age pulls out a gun. "This is property of the queen." Josh sees the glint of the gun and acts fast. He tackles the kid and receives a bullet in his shoulder. What will happen to him? (look for sequel)
Chapter 2 He wakes up remembering what happened to him. The kid shot him then tossed him off a cliff. He should be dead shouldn't he? He looks at himself and his only injury is the bullet wound. Why didn't that fall hurt him? He thought about this as he walked toward his ship getting ready for his return trip.
It doesn't read well, the word choice doesn't seem right. Great idea, just needs longer paragraphs and stuff. More description too.