Story of an Elf!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by UndeadMiltonius, Jul 10, 2012.

  1. Story of an Elf.
    So in a kingdom there was a villager known as Shakula, he was an elf raised by his parents, he knew he was a spoiled brat who would simply die like the others fighting for his kingdom, but what he didn't know is that he will be the greatest savior of his land..


    So Shakula was wandering around and playing the clown, he wasn't a much of a fighter tho, so he liked to make people laugh, he went on long daring adventures and was known best for his luck.
    But one day while he was marching on a hill, for an instant he saw dark Elvin assassins and disciples of Shadows, and then they disappeared without seeing him, he knew one thing, his kingdom wasn't powerful enough to fight such an enemy so why would they be near? He knew that the KAW GOD didn't allow discrimination against smaller kingdoms so he only let ones on par fight, but as they disappeared he sensed their Spiritual aura and could follow it where he reached their camps.

    He caught an Elvin assassin drunk and slit her throat and took on her form, of course the Elves were thought of such sorcery, he then continued and went through their line of defense when a Dark Assassin stopped him and asked him in what division he was in, Shakula didn't know anything but he knew the Hierarchy when it comes to Spies and Assassins, so like a boss, he pushed the Dark Assassin and told him " Do you really think a lowly Assassin like you can ask me a question like this? " but what also he didn't know was that the Dark Assassin was a Captain of a division himself, so he stood up and said, " Who are you to disrespect me like this Anoha?, I'll make sure I'll reclaim your head during our invasion " and he walked away, Shakula's luck saved him once again, he knew the body he possessed was called Anoha but still not the division, a couple of minutes later he heard a sound and it was almost midnight, every Assassin was heading torwards a Dark Almighty Sorcerer, Shakula did the same, the Sorcerer went on a big rock and said " Today, the Gods won't reach us, we live by the sword and we die by the sword!, the Gods will not stand in our way nomore and all weaklings will be destroyed, and today the separation of our Realm with that of the dimension of the Gods will be broken and we will be freed! " Shakula knew immediately that he had to stop this, Shakula was a weak fighter but had great Magic, the Sorcerer then said " We, the 4th division of Anthony's greatness will destroy eastern kingdoms, I will blind the Gods! And we will destroy what must be destroyed!"

    Shakula then regrouped with the other Elvins and prepared with them, he knew he had to stop them but what could he do? He then tried to cause Mayhem in the camps to win more time, his great magic allowed him to create an illusion of a huge Cyclope titan with a banner on his back on the West, so all the Assassins went towards him and tried to stop the illusion Cyclope, then the Sorcery stood up and started casting a spell, first starting with an incantation " Oh Dark Shepard, you who gave me form out of nothing, you who gave me existence, as you laugh the Demons of Hell march towards power, the Abyss general is pleased when you are, so allow me, ME, Shairon of Lokali, laugh as I live a life in the Recluse void! " then he said " I cast, Eternal Illumination! " since everyone left with an illusion of Anoha, Shakula remained and dared fight the Sorcerer, He came and stopped Shairon before he could accomplish the spell!

    Shairon took his Staff and laughed at Shakula saying " You dare fight me pathetic Elf? " Shakula then said " Yes, as the most powerful Sorcerer in Jakoben, I do " and the fight started, both Mages threw fireballs, then Shairon summoned an Undead Giant behind him with a gigantic Axe, and Shakula also summoned a three tailed Wolf with tattoos over his body, as both sorcerers went on the head of their titans, Shakula puked white glubbish liquid in the mouth of the Wolf, and Shairon cast a spell as his Undead Titan was on his knees, charging a powerful blast, then both Titans threw a devastating ball of power and they both colided, Shairon screamed, " Those who feel eternal hatred like me overpower foolish pures like you " Shairon then concentrated his power and he overpowered the Wolf and it was forced to disappear, the same for the Undead Giant, but Shakula took a part of the hit from Shairon and was badly injured, then he teleported himself beside Shairon and he knew something, Shairon was too powerful, so Shakula cast another spell " I cast, Ropes of Eternal desperation! " and Shairon's hand were cuffed.

    Shakula looked him in the eyes and saw all the pain and hatred Shairon had, he had a last option left, he then said " Oh you who balances all, who maintains our existence, as your weapon is laid down to cause punishment, we rejoice it, appear now, Reaper of Death! " then Death appeared, he was double the size of Shakula, Shairon screamed " What is this? How dare you cast a forbidden ancient spell? " Then the Grim Reaper looked at Shakula telling him " How dare you pathetic elf summon me? " Shakula said " Forgive me, but I need to rid this world of this great evil " then Death responded " The deal is simple, a Soul for a Soul, and a delicious one, if I am not pleased I will sentence you to eternal torture in my Underworld " then Shakula said " I will gladly give up my Soul for Shairon's one " Then Sharion said " Antoine! How dare you do this? His greatness will not forgive and neither will I! " then Antoine ( Death ) said " I care not for what does my brother, he is as equally pathetic as you are! one day his Soul will be mine! " and a cross came behind Shairon and he was forced on it, Death then said " Only those who can summon me give me enough power to take a Soul in whom the Gods banned me from doing it! Shakula, if your will isn't strong enough I will let go of him and I will take yours only " Shakula then screamed in agony, and started bursting out a LOT of Spiritual Aura, even Death was surprised as he teared apart Shairon's Soul and Shairon lastly screamed " IT DOES NOT END HERE, MY END IS SIMPLY HIS BEGINNING!" the Shakula remember his loved one and all his Kingdom, and then Antoine ate his soul, then Shakula's body and Shairon's one became pale and both fell on the ground, and then Antoine opened a portal and went back to the Underworld.

    Due to Shairon not casting the spell the Gods saw the Assassins and killed them all reducing them to dust..


    Years later, in the Kingdom, Shakula was remembered as an Elf who got lost and killed in the forest, nobody in the Kingdom knew about what happened, but Shakula was happy he died a hero saving all his beloved ones..
    The End.


    Took me 40 mins writing this, thanks to anyone who fully read it! I simply did this because I wanted to wait for my soldier regens but I really wanted to continue and am finally done, I have a lot of stories like this and I really enjoy typing them! thanks for reading it y'all! ( Finally put paragraphes and got rid of a lot of grammar errors :D )
    -UndeadMiltonius
     
  2. My story got critizied for the same thing. You need paragraphs. Otherwise its good.
     
  3. Oh alright, but Im on my phone so I will have to do it tomorrow :/
     
  4. This story makes me want to gauge out my eyes
     
  5. Ever heard of a paragraph?
     
  6. ehat a deep imagination u have milt, i wish i ready more from u.
    great story i like it.
     
  7. A block paragraph maybe
     
  8. :lol:
     
  9. I cant read anything without paragraphs my adult ADD kicks in
     
  10. Done, sorry about it hehe