Still Water..

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  1. Me and my KaW sis The_Doctor_Luvs_Sugar are going to be taking turns writing chapters about two emo kids, running away without any resources from an unknown monster in the seas.
    The rest on the humans have been killed of by these unknown monsters as far on they know..
    And so it begins..
     
  2. Prologue:
    Things have turned out to be the worst. Everyones dead it's only us left. A mystical sea monster has killed everyone and is drowning the land only the United States is left. In 6 weeks it will b gone. My brother and I have lost everything and have resorted to cutting ourselves. We r all that's left. The creature and it's minions are gaining on us. We must survive.
     
  3. Intro to Cassandra:
    Hi!! My names Cassandra!! I have no idea why I'm so happy considering that there are no more people on this planet anymore. Maybe it's because I just got away from these giant blobs out to kill me!(they're the sea monster's minions) Well since this is an introduction to me I should say what I look like I guess. I'm tall and I have straight black hair and green eyes. I'm probably going to be killed bur I'm taking pride in being the last human on Earth. That's all for now so bye!! I hope I live for another chapter!!
     
  4. Chapter 1 (Kendra):
    ​My name is Kendra for the past 2 weeks the continents have disappeared, the usa is the only one left. My brother James and I have gone to the emo side. It sorta helps since we are the only people left and a giant sea monster is after us and his minions. Well maybe not so much help as calms my mind. It’s the year 2463 and we have no supplies to save us. We are all alone. It’s up to us. We are all that’s left.

    Chapter 2 (James):
    ​My sister and I have been spotted by the blobs and are now running for our lives.
    ​“Oh, look it’s a warehouse. Go in there.” Kendra said.
    ​“Ok, but they are gaining on us.”
    ​“Thank God I grabbed this laser gun from the last place we hid.”
    ​“You’ve had a gun this entire time?” I asked.
    ​“Yeah, but its nuclear powered and there isn’t much juice left in it.”
    ​“Shoot at them NOW!!!!​“
    ​“Ok.” She then started shooting and killing them. We ran into the warehouse. Thank the God it was a food warehouse.
    ​“There’s food in here.” Kendra said.
    ​“Yeah, but look at the expiration date.”
    ​“Ugh. It’s five years past, but at least it’s food.” Kendra said as she started to eat the crackers.

     
  5. Chapter 3(Cassandra):
    Ok what is wrong with this picture? I got away from the blobs and head back to my warehouse, I'm planning on doing something to celebrate maybe eating one of the not as expired foods that I have hidden. I'm about to walk in and I hear voices. Am I hallucinating or is there someone in MY warehouse?!?! I grab my half dead nuclear gun and preparing for another blob attack I yell "What are you doing in my warehouse?!?! I've been here for a while so OUT!!!!!
     
  6. Chapter 4 (Kendra)-
    ​So now this creepy “girl” is yelling at us to leave. What’s the deal with that? She says to get out​.
    ​“How do we know it’s yours? Does it have your name on it?” I asked.
    ​“Actually there is a plate right here.” Weird girl said. I looked over to where she pointed.
    This Warehouse Belongs to Cassandra Agend by order of the high order of awesome people.
    Rachel Wilkinson
    ​“See I told you. Rachel gave me this and signed this plaque. NOW LEAVE!!!!” Weird girl whose name is apparently Cassandra said.
    ​“Wait. Can we work together? We are the only humans left alive.” James asked.
    ​“NO!! I WANT TO BE THE LAST HUMAN ON EARTH!!! GO JUMP OFF A CLIFF!!” Cassandra yelled at us.
    ​“But I don’t want to die that way. We have to save the Earth and kill the Evil Sea monster.” James stated.
     
  7. Chapter 5(Cassandra):
    ​“Well maybe you guys will die in the process” I said. NO ONE beats me!!
    ​“Ok then, do you know anything about the monster or the blobs?” James asked.
    ​“Well I’ve heard about some alien named Esmeralda Mán. I think that she is the Head Chief of the High Order of the Blobs.” I said.
    ​“There are a lot of high orders around here.” Kendra remarked.
    ​“And low orders. I’m in a middle order called The Middle Order of Slightly Less Awesome People then the High Order of Awesomeness or the MOSLAPHOA.”
    ​“That’s a mouthful” James rudely commented.
    ​“You’re lucky we’re allies right now.” I said.
     
  8. haha
    good story
     
  9. Chapter 6 (Kendra)-

    So now she is threatening my brother. I would like kill her of the whole world didn't depend on us working together.
    "Dude, Back off him."
    "Aww is big sis gonna stand up for
    You know??" she said.
    "shhh... I hear something." James said.
    "Same. What is it??" I asked. There was a gnawing noise coming from the door.
    "I think it's the blobs. Hide!!!" I said.
    "ok." they said simultaneously.
    So now we are stuck in an abandoned warehouse and are probably going to die. Perfect, just perfect. Where to hide? There's an empty crate. I think
    I'll hide in there.
    I ran to the crate and jumped in holding my gun for dear life. Thank God it had some juice left in it.
    "We know you're in here. You couldn't have left. We have you surrounded" a human sounding voice said. Could it have been Esmeralda??? I think it was.
    Apparently I was breathing too hard because she came over and started searching for any life. It's like this is CSI or something. Weird. This is how it's going to end, with me in a crate.
     
  10. Chapter 7 (James)-

    I'm hiding in between two walls. I know that sounds impossible, but there was a crack in between the walls and I'm pretty skinny right now (due to lack of food). I just fit.
    I have no idea where the other two girls are, but the lady walked right by me and didn't notice me. That's one thing I did right today.
    I think she's gone. Wait, no I see a blob. Thank god it did not see me. I am like camouflaged. My skin, hair, and clothes just blend in.
    "Children you have a half hour to surrender or we will bomb this place." Esmeralda said and I heard the front door shut.
    I waited a good 10 minutes before stepping out of my hiding place and saying, "Sis?? Cassandra?? Where are you??"
    "Right here." Cassandra said. She looked very pretty with her black and green hair, even with the dust all ore her.
    "I HATE crates. Never hide in a crate with expired food!!!" Kendra said.
     
  11. Please don't post on this post on the still water feed back. Lily is supposed to write te next chapters so. I can't help with that
     
  12. Chapter 8 (Cassandra)

    Ok so while the girl and her brother hid (I have to say the boy's wasn't bad, the girl needs to work on breathing quieter) as for my hiding place I had one already ready. I had made a hole in the earth that I could fit in if I lay sideways then I pulled an old tarp over me. My biggest fear like this was that someone would come and accidentally step on me therefore finding me. I finally heard them leaving and threw the tarp off. The tarp had left me covered in dust but I was alive so make that TWO escapes!!! Woo!!! After checking with the warehouse stealers I heard a "crunch" outside. I ran over to the window and looked out. I saw an army of blobs retreating with their master, Esmeralda. She was blond kinda tall and even here from this window she radiated power. I have to say I'm kinda nervous for us if we ever have to confront her.
     
  13. Chapter 9 James)-

    "How are we going to stop her?" I asked

    "umm... Why don't we use the nuclear power plants around here??" Cassandra asked.

    "nuclear power didn't work last time. When the rest of humanity tried. I know because our mom and dad were recruited at last minute and they died." Kendra said.

    "Aww I'm so sorry." Cassandra said.

    "we can't be stuck in the past and we need to look into te future. It's ok they died for a good cause. We shall do them justice." I said while trying to hold back tears. I saw Kendra Doing the same.

    "I have an idea!" Cassandra said. "I remember there being an escape hole that runs towards the river. We could go down there!"

    "well we can go to the nuclear plant and recharge our weapons. Draw the monster there and blow it up." Kendra said.

    "And maybe u will die too!!!" Cassandra said.

    "alright going to ignore the last comment. Where is it??" I asked.

    "down that little hall." she said.

    "Little hall???" Kendra said.
     
  14. Chapter 10 (Cassandra):

    Ok I was inwardly freaking out. I mean I can't let those two notice. I really want to be the last person on Earth but it'll be harder if these two are growing on me. Then there's also Esmeralda. I'm pretty sure she's human also so... Ugh. That's the only word for it. Don't get me wrong I'm not some murderer I can be I really nice person but I have a goal and I will achieve it. Anyway to get to the river you had to go down a hole and through a tunnel. The tunnel was gratefully still there and it could very well be our escape route. Though I did leave out a minor detail. The tunnel is really really old. When I first found it no one had probably been down there for centuries! There were vines growing up the sides and cracks but it seemed sturdy. Kendra grabbed a couple things of food before we left. Since I was leading I ducked into the tunnel first. Not much had changed but I must have grown because the tunnel seemed smaller. Did I mention I HATE small places? It's not bad enough for me to be claustrophobic but I still don't usually go looking for tight places. I think I started shaking I'm not sure but I HAD to get out.
     
  15. Chapter 11 (Kendra):

    I'm still kinda... well I'm not sure how to describe it. Cassandra just gives me a funny feeling. She acts strong and is really proud but I wonder how far she'd go to remain proud. I followed her into the tunnel with James right behind me. The tunnel wasn't in good condition and I began to worry that it would collapse on us. It was really quiet and I wanted to relieve the tension a bit so I cast about for ideas. I realized we didn't know much about her and was going to ask her about herself when she started shaking.
    "Cassandra are you ok?" I asked.
    "Hmm..? What? Yeah I'm fine. Why wouldn't I be?" She replied.
    I wasn't convinced, she was shaking all over.
    "You're shaking!!! What's wrong?!"
    "Nothing... Nothing... Just a little claustrophobic."
    "Claustrophobic? Really? And you wander tunnels?" James but in.
    "W-well I do live in a huge warehouse and it's not like I do this every day!"
    I was worried now. I was scared she would freak out and leave us. She was our ticket out and we couldn't afford to lose her.
     
  16. Chapter 12 (James)-

    So the tunnel is getting smaller and smaller. The food is getting heavier and heavier. Cassandra is kind of freaking out and I think the blobs know we left.

    "What are we going to do??" I said after hearing a gnawing noise.

    "RUN!!!" Kendra said. Just then I saw Cassandra fall down.

    "Cassandra??" I asked. There was no reply and the gnawing was getting louder. Crap our guide blacked out.

    "We could make this like Sleeping Beauty. True loves kiss. James kiss her!!" Kendra said frantically.

    "I'm up!!" Cassandra said and we started running and the girls started shooting while I held the torch. I know you're asking where did the torch come from. Well we had it when we started down the tunnel but I didn't think it was important enough to mention.

    "Look there's the opening!!!" Kendra yelled. We got to the ladder, climbed up and shut the door.

    "Lock it!!!" I yelled. That didn't matter cuz Esmeralda was in the front of their pack and she had a nuclear gun too.
     
  17. Chapter 13 (Cassandra):

    I was seriously freaking out. The tunnel was getting smaller and smaller. I couldn't take it anymore I just collapsed. Then faintly I hear Kendra telling James to kiss me and that got me right on up. I'm so not kissing anyone!! The blobs were after us and we were running for our lives. I started firing my gun but all of a sudden it ran out of energy and died.
    "Shoot!! Why now??"
    We made it to the end of the tunnel and James is yelling at me to lock it but a thought that was probably going to get me killed crossed my mind. I still had questions didn't I? Like why was earth in particular being attacked? Why is it killing everyone?? And what stinking planet are these creeps coming from?? These are just a few. I thought that maybe we could finally get some answers. I mean I'm probably going to die here anyway why not know why you're being killed?
    "Hey you!!" I called out. "Wait!! Don't kill us yet!! I want to know why I'm dying first!!"
     
  18. Chapter 14 (Kendra)-

    So James, Cassandra, and I escaped and Cassandra practically just let them out. We just ran away from them and she opens the door to let them
    Kill us.

    "What do you think you're doing Cassie??" I asked.

    "who's Cassie??" Cassandra asked.

    "you Cassandra is to long."

    "ok can we talk about this later??" James asked. Right then I heard esmeralda walk right out of our escape tunnel. We were going to die!

    "Have you decided to surrender?" she asked.

    "take me to your leader, earthling or alone in this Case!" James said, we let him watch way to many alien movies.

    "first why aren't you fleeing??" she asked us.

    "Because Cassie here, is a big idiot who wanted to talk." I replied.

    "I am not an idiot, you are!" she protested.

    "so we'll give you an answer for an answer." James said. He watched to many of the clean house shows too. Bargaining, alien quotes, what's next???

    "ok." Esmeralda replied, "but we have to agree on something."
     
  19. Srry alone was supposed to b alien