Spell~Bound FeedBack

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by XxBrooke_ParisXx, Jan 30, 2012.

  1. This is the feedback page for Spell~Bound! Leave me your comments here [/purple]
     
    #1 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Jan 30, 2012
  2. 1. Is this an Ouran High School Host Club fan fic?

    2. Is it Natsu or Katsu? It kept changing at the beginning.
     
    #2 Allioss, Jan 30, 2012
  3. Yeah I apologize for that... I made the brothers Natsu and Katsu but then changed Katsu to Kaoru... Sorry... It'll be more clear in the next chapter
     
    #3 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Jan 31, 2012
  4. Chapter 2 is posted
     
    #4 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Jan 31, 2012
  5. Chapter 3 is posted
     
    #5 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Jan 31, 2012
  6. i think its an awkward story. lol keep writing though i found it amusing.
     
    #6 kb4eva1, Jan 31, 2012
  7. Well its Yaoi which means BoyxBoy
     
    #7 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Jan 31, 2012
  8. oh yes i picked that up whens the next part comming out :)?
     
    #8 kb4eva1, Jan 31, 2012
  9. It's coming out later today
     
    #9 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Jan 31, 2012
  10. Chapter 4 is up
     
    #10 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Feb 1, 2012
  11. Good story.
     
    #11 *-Wicked_Angel- (01), Feb 1, 2012
  12. I only read the beginning, it's not bad could use more description but it REALLY REALLY reminds me of this anime I watched that had a very very similar beginning.
    (I found the anime by accident so i cant remember the name, I'm not against boy x boy stuff, and its rather interesting but that anime was a little bit more than I bargained for and then I checked out the manga and...it was...well...a bit too graphic...)
    Anyways good story so far!
     
    #12 Storallelite, Feb 1, 2012
  13. Chapter 5 is posted
     
    #13 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Feb 1, 2012
  14. hello.


    goodbye
     
    #14 d_bo_assassin, Feb 1, 2012
  15. Assassin pls stop commenting on my stories!!! That's what feedback is for!!! I'm serious! Pls stop it!
     
    #15 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Feb 1, 2012
  16. UPDATE: Due to the annoyance of d_bo_assassin's commenting ON the story page, I won't be writing more. WALL or PC me if you like the story and I can PC the other chapters to you.
     
    #16 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Feb 2, 2012
  17. Don't let him tick u off, just ignore him and get a mod to delete his posts
     
    #17 Storallelite, Feb 2, 2012
  18. Ok
     
    #18 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Feb 3, 2012
  19. Assassin needs to get out of fan fic....
     
    #19 BonkersLeighRose, Feb 4, 2012
  20. I'll post more once I talk to moose about assassin
     
    #20 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Feb 4, 2012
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