Songfic

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, Mar 5, 2012.

  1. I've never really written anything before. This is a first draft of the first part of a songfic.
    Song- Numb, by Linkin Park.
    P.S.- D_bo, go away. I don't want you here.

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    Tired of being what you want me to be, feeling so faithless, lost under the surface

    Slowly, Reyna woke up. The events of the past night were still fresh in her mind, but she had shut her father out, so it seemed like more of a blur.
    As she yawned, she attempted to think back. It was still slightly fuzzy, but she remembered most of it.
    -Flashback-
    "No! You're doing it wrong! Do it like this! Think for once!" Reyna shrank back as her father screamed.
    "Your head's always in the clouds! Stop reading and daydreaming! Later on you'll need this in life!"
    Reyna thought to herself, I'm not you. This is America, not where you grew up. Just because you grew up fast, and you had to take care of yourself, that doesn't mean you have to push that onto me. She bit her lip and endured the rest of the screaming.
    -End Flashback-
    That was it, then. She was tired of being who he wanted her to be.
    She blinked off the last traces of sleep, and stood up. Today, a new beginning.
    "REYNA!" Her father's call echoed through the pale green hallways.
    Or not.
     
  2. Pretty good.. Didn't you say you were a beginner?
     
  3. Yes. I did >.> Why?
     
  4. Story of my life. But with my mom.
     
  5. Nothing bad, just saying its good for a beginner... I might post a story of mine in a sec
     
  6. ~~(0.0)~~ Lurker dance!!


    It's good. :3 I DEMAND MOREH!!!
     
  7. xD Hi Leo. And maybe, if I ever get to finishing it. I have a habit of starting something and never finishing it.
     
  8. Yeah, ik Lethal. I wrote it for me
     
  9. ^Me and you. I think forums doesn't post certain symbols xD
     
  10. Yea I know Pheefster. But still very close to meh. >.<
     
  11. it's good o_O
     
  12. I'm still working on posting the DAMN story.. My patience is running rather thin (-_-*)
     
  13. Lethal: Ik.
    Ric: Ty :3

    Continue or not? And if you think it's not good, idc if you're my friend and you want to be soft on me and my beginner-ness. Just tell me xD
     
  14. Yes continue
     
  15. Definitely continue. And I can always pm u things my mom told meh. It may help ur creative flow.
     
  16. Continue Chica!!
     
  17. Hmmm.... Not bad....me likes...me wants more o.o
     
  18. xD Thanks to all of you guys, and lethal, please do.
     
  19. BUMPDATE!^w^

    I DEMAND MORE! :3