Some thoughts and feelings

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by xx-daTomoT-xx, Sep 29, 2010.

  1. Just some poems I have written and will write.

    Now you're gone,
    Life has fused it won't turn on.
    I know you won't come back,
    Waiting for my everlasting black.
    The bleak landscape of my mind, 
    A playground of demons left behind.
    Are you watching, are you reading, 
    These words I write of my soul now bleeding?
    Why did I never say goodbye,
    I had no chance and now I cry.
    Why me, why you, why us, 
    I want to scream and shout and cuss.
    I want you back ...

    Feedback welcomed.
     
  2. Does "Marry me dat!" count as feedback?
     
  3. It does 
     
  4. Saw your name and just had to come see.  That better be a yes by the way.
     
  5. It's a match made in Heaven! We'll be like Romeo and Juliet.
     
  6. Ohyeah 
    Married

     
  7. Cough gay cough. XD how r u DaT?
     
  8. I'm Under 20 and over 10 that's all I'll say.

    Hi mike

    Hi cal
     
  9. I didn't write this it's a song by Avril Lavigne but here It is

    "Slipped Away"

    Na na, na na na, na na
    I miss you, miss you so bad
    I don't forget you, oh it's so sad
    I hope you can hear me
    I remember it clearly

    The day you slipped away
    Was the day I found it won't be the same
    Ooooh

    Na na na na na na na

    I didn't get around to kiss you
    Goodbye on the hand
    I wish that I could see you again
    I know that I can't

    Oooooh
    I hope you can hear me cause I remember it clearly

    The day you slipped away
    Was the day I found it won't be the same
    Ooooh

    I had my wake up
    Won't you wake up
    I keep asking why
    And I can't take it
    It wasn't fake
    It happened, you passed by

    Now you are gone, now you are gone
    There you go, there you go
    Somewhere I can't bring you back
    Now you are gone, now you are gone
    There you go, there you go,
    Somewhere your not coming back

    The day you slipped away
    Was the day i found it won't be the same noo..
    The day you slipped away
    Was the day that i found it won't be the same oooh...

    Na na, na na na, na na
    I miss you
     
  10. Not my fault he looks so good in a dress...
     
  11.  < iGod's bikini. Don't worry he keeps it on. Most of the time.
     
  12. Another of mine.

    Day has ended,
    But night is gone,
    Time has stopped,
    Yet I walk on,
    Into the havens,
    Where I'll be free,
    To live in peace,
    Eternally.

    My time has come,
    I fear it not,
    Unto this earth I say,
    Farewell.
     
  13. I like that last one, it's really good!
     
  14. does this look good on me?
     
  15.  with theese shoes 