Some of my Poems

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *xXDark-Forest-ForeverXx (01), Mar 19, 2012.

  1. No name;
    Brightest feeling,
    Darkest fear.
    Cuts are healing,
    My death is near.
    Tonight,
    My soul is at flight.
     
    #1 *xXDark-Forest-ForeverXx (01), Mar 19, 2012
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    #2 -WillyTheDeuce-, Mar 19, 2012
  3. lol this poem sucks
     
    #3 d_bo_assassin, Mar 19, 2012
  4. ^Come on, you've seen worse.
     
    #4 cheesemuffin, Mar 19, 2012
  5. .......
    /lock
    Thanks...
     
    #5 *xXDark-Forest-ForeverXx (01), Mar 19, 2012
  6. ._. I'm not going to comment, for fear of getting on Dark's nerves.
     
    #6 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, Mar 19, 2012
  7. maybe I've seen worse. but this one is definitely high up on the omg this sucks list
     
    #7 d_bo_assassin, Mar 20, 2012
  8. probably because it was an overly simplistic poem written by a sad emo
     
    #8 d_bo_assassin, Mar 20, 2012
  9. He's not an emo. Anyways, it takes one to know one.
     
    #9 TornHeart, Mar 20, 2012
  10. I encourage you to write more poems. However, it was confusing and over simplistic. Work on that and you should be fine! I like the raw emotion though.
     
    #10 LethalEncounter, Mar 21, 2012
  11. he's not emo? you're crazy. his wording clearly indicates his emo tendencies.
     
    #11 d_bo_assassin, Mar 21, 2012
  12. He's not emo, d_bo.
     
    #12 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, Mar 21, 2012
  13. the hell he's not. only depressed emo ppl write such poems. it's nasty
     
    #13 d_bo_assassin, Mar 22, 2012
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