Snow White and Rose Red Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Kimber04 (01), Mar 21, 2012.

  1. The title is self explanatory.
    Feedback goes here.
    Anyone welcome!
     
  2. feedback is unnecessary for such a badly written story.

    it sucked. bad.
     
  3. It's great
     
  4. It's shockingly ****
     
  5. Oh look a new D_Bo -.-
     
  6. Nope difference

    D-bo= epic troll
    Me: vet hater
     
  7. The only problem is the rest isn't there... It's got GREAT detail! Keep it up bro bear!!
     
  8. And d_bo, Ÿøú can't say ANYTHING. I seriously doubt you actually read the story.
     
  9. I can to say something. "something"

    now **** yo face. I read EVERYTHING I comment on. I mean I gotta give you guys a chance before I tell you your writing is horrible.
     
  10. Oh how I do love drama. Even if it is on my own crappy work.
     
  11. Lol oh D_bo! I "Love the way you lie!"