Shepherd of the Fold Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Warry_the_Penguin, Jul 2, 2013.

  1. Feedback thread.
     
    #1 Warry_the_Penguin, Jul 2, 2013
  2. Good atmosphere.. Mischievous and mysterious tones.. 
     
    #2 AshesOfEden, Jul 2, 2013
  3. Me gusta!! 
    Write/post more!!!
     
    #3 Invincible1707, Jul 2, 2013
  4. Thanks
     
    #4 Warry_the_Penguin, Jul 3, 2013
  5. More!
     
    #5 Alkais, Jul 3, 2013
  6. Chapter 2 is done. Honest feedback appreciated.
     
    #6 Seymore_Justice, Jul 4, 2013
  7. You kept me hooked all the way through it. Excellent work. 
     
    #7 Invincible1707, Jul 4, 2013
  8. Posted with wrong account xD
     
    #8 Warry_the_Penguin, Jul 5, 2013
  9. This is fantastic! Keep going!!
     
    #9 Amberclaw2000, Jul 6, 2013
  10. Not bad ;)
     
    #10 Avatar, Jul 6, 2013
  11. I like it Warry. Keep it up. It flows well, clever title, good description. It's all good! Couple grammar things but you know. It's still good. 
     
    #11 Lil_Tiger, Jul 6, 2013
  12. I luv! Only wish there was more...
     
    #12 DavSriik_YOLO, Jul 8, 2013
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