Shaguar Productions presents "Death of millions"

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  1. Authors note: this story is mixed with historical accuracy and fictional characters and events so please dont go off thinking that every character on this story is real.

    June 26th 1914
    my name is Gavrilo princip...and i'm going to murder the Archduke of Austria for the intrests of the Serbian national security.

    It's a cold night here in belgrade,Light snow,almost midnight.im waiting for my associates to have a meeting in this small alley,i've been waiting so long that even the police stopped by and asked me a few questions.

    But finally,i see two dark shadowy figures walking towards me and start calling my name "Princip you finally made it!" "yea kinda ironic" i said. My associate Dimitri was a very tall pale man with a bit of a humour that he likes to have on every conversation, and my other associate Nikolai (they are russian) a very short-tempered man with high ambitions. "so princip rumor has it that your a very wanted man around this district" "not necissarily nickolai,they left me alone for a few days" (i was wanted for killing two men in a barfight apparently) "well let's get to buisness...i heard you two were weapon dealers and well i need a quick high powered pistol of some kind" "what do you need it for" asked dimitri.

    The air grew silent...i could not tell them what i was going to do or they might report me and the whole operation will be blown over. "but anyhow it's none of our buisness, but the only weapon like that we have in stock currently like that weapon you described would be the mauser pistol" said nickolai. "how much?" "FREE!..but on one condition" "what condition will that be?" "well you see this man named isailovic nemanyid, owes me lots and lots of money and refused to pay me back, and without that money we could go bankrupt" "so what do you want me to do with him?" "he hides his money in a bank here in this district which is heavily guarded by 30 officers, and i want you to take it" "so it's an espionage mission" "exactly,but if you manage to alert the guards we will not give you the weapon" "fine...same place same time?" "yea and don't be late" "very funny"
     
  2. Re: Shaguar Productions presents "Death of millions" part 1

    This is my first story and will be having more of them so please enjoy :)
     
  3. June 27th 1914

    It's morning..the cars are passing by along with a couple horses that are racing out of the city. The bank was closed today but i did not want to waste anytime.I could not sleep last night because i was too busy thinking about the duke and the gun and how to get into this bank.So i decided that it would be stupid to break into a bank during broad daylight so i decided to wait till night,but why not do some stuff now,although i'm very nervous about tomorrow i even threw up a couple times...i'm even reconsidering on doing this.

    So as night comes i walk across the street and see a patrol behind me,i pretend i don't notice them but they just keep following me. so i was trying to find out a way to loose em until an officer yelled out "SIR ARE YOU LOST!?" "UHHMM NO I JUST LIVE ACROSS THE CITY" "OK CARRY ON" ...i think i need to change my pants...

    So i try this again....i walk down the dark street with the street lights as bright as stars then i try opening the door and it was open for some reason (thank god) so i hear voices inside the dark room..i pull out my dagger just in case..i hear a door open so i hide behind the counter just in case if its police. i see two men walking out then i realize it's nikolai and dimitri! but why would they be doing the mission that they assigned to me? so i check the safe and the safe door was open! it appears they took the money!

    So i walk up to them and hear them saying "haha that idiot thinks we are actually going to let him have the best pistol in the world.i don't know what to do now...it's now or never and i need to make it to saravejo by tomorrow.
     
  4. Now all i have is a dagger and the police are behind me (just my luck) and i was thinking of killing them instantly but now i have to do this fast...."HEY YOU SIR I THOUGHT YOU WERE GOING TO YOUR HOUSE" (nickolai and dimitri slowly turned around and i had to go for the kill right now or i'll be arrested and i failed to kill the archduke so i have to do it now "PRINCE WHAT AR-" they were both dead on the ground, i quickly took the mauser turned around and for an instant second when the cop pulled out his gun and pulled the trigger i froze....

    i closed my eyes and heard two gunshots go off (pew pew) i asked myself if i was dead a couple times then i saw that a group of drug-dealers shot the cop, and i considered myself the luckiest man alive.So then i jumped on my horse and rode unto saravejo.
     
  5. June 28th 1914

    Today is the day....

    A huge crowd in the distance all lined up in the streets of saravejo. all clappin with smiles on their faces,but im just wondering if i will get killed on the spot.As i ride towrd the city i feel if as this will shape generations of humanity and it will change the world forever as if millions died by my hand...but it's only one man...

    So i get off my horse and jump into the crowd,but no sign of the duke.Although from the distance i can hear the other side praising the duke and i can imagine them showering him with flowers or roses as if he was god. My heart is beating 4x then it normally would.As i was a child i wanted to make this world better and yet i'm not sure if i'm doing th right decision.

    Finally, i see the duke in his car...i push through the crowd as if they are nothing so i run up to the car and everything went in slow motion...i was pulling the trigger..the duke was staring at me as if he went through this a hundred times and i pulled the trigger then europe was in silence for a matter of seconds and everything went fast again and all i can hear is "KILL HIM KILL THE ASSASIN!!!" and "THE DUKE IS DEAD" and just screams in terror,i just ran out of the scene and rode unto greece...



    THE END
     
  6. Hope you enjoyed!! and this is my first short story and will be making more thrilling stories on events of history, fictional or non-fictional
     
  7. (waits for review)