Shadows Rising Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Aug 23, 2011.

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  1. This is the proper place to nag at me to add more chapters. You can also post feedback here, and I strongly encourage posting constructive criticism here as well. Whatever.

    Happy nagging!

    X's and O's,

    Lady
     
    #1 *lady-marian (01), Aug 23, 2011
  2. Seems like a good day for... REVOLUTION?

    Anyways, it's good and all, but I hate, hate, HATE how you named my character "Patch".
     
    #2 cheesemuffin, Aug 23, 2011
  3. Hehe... Sorry. 
     
    #3 *lady-marian (01), Aug 24, 2011
  4. lol good so far
     
    #4 *Magickous (01), Aug 24, 2011
  5.  I like it
     
    #5 Willow564, Aug 24, 2011
  6. Btw, I made a guide for feedback.
     
    #6 cheesemuffin, Aug 24, 2011
  7. And then out of the shadows jumped...

    A rabid squirrel!

    WAAAAH!
     
    #7 *iPimella (01), Aug 24, 2011
  8. Want to see lady M being noobish? Check page 3 of GlooMi's Guide to Writing
     
    #8 *iPimella (01), Aug 24, 2011
  9. I love it :D Thank you for putting Alyx in 
     
    #9 Allioss, Aug 24, 2011
  10. This is a great start:))
     
    #10 *babygurl2112 (01), Aug 24, 2011
  11. I like the chapter. It left me wondering what to expect next  Thanks for putting Zoey in 
     
    #11 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Aug 24, 2011
  12. Lets compare:

    This feedback - good feedback
    My feedback - MOARMOARMOAR

    I'd really like some good feedback

     
    #12 cheesemuffin, Aug 24, 2011
  13. THANK YOU EVERYONE!

    Ps: I was never a noob. I was a newb. As in newbie.
     
    #13 *lady-marian (01), Aug 24, 2011
  14. Newb - new to the game

    Noob/nub - asking stupid questions

    Regular - acquainted with KaW

    Vet - kinda well-known, been around

    Legend - famous throughout KaW
     
    #14 cheesemuffin, Aug 24, 2011
  15. I'd say I'm a vet and Lady's a vet
     
    #15 cheesemuffin, Aug 24, 2011
  16. For fan fiction.
     
    #16 *lady-marian (01), Aug 24, 2011
  17. I remember when people first started calling me "lady" on here! I was thinking: dang! That's rude! They could at least use my name instead of calling me "lady". Then I realized lady was my name. 
     
    #17 *lady-marian (01), Aug 24, 2011
  18. lol
     
    #18 *Magickous (01), Aug 24, 2011
  19. Exciting from the start I really want to read more!!
     
    #19 Storallelite, Aug 24, 2011
  20. more more more
     
    #20 *Magickous (01), Aug 24, 2011
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