Please post feedback on the feedback thread. Prologue The called this kid shadows because that's what he was. It was rare to even see his face. Nobody knew why but he was always standing in the shadows that's how he got his name. Truth is shadow has a very dark secret one that he only knows. He thought today was gonna be a normal day as he put his hood up to conceal his face something didn't feel right. He just shrugged this off and went outside. As he walked to school he knew something was wrong. Tell me on the feedback thread if I should continue. Hope this works out!
Chapter 1 As shadow walked to his usual place alone in a dark corner he noticed something. There was a girl already there. "Hey" She said quietly "if this is your spot I'll leave". "No you can stay" Shadow replied softly. "No really I'll just leave" The girl quickly said. As her blonde hair blew in the wind. "I want you to stay" Said shadow very quietly. She was the most beautiful girl he had ever seen. Her long blonde hair. Nice hazel eyes. Her cheeks blushed a bit this just made her look cuter. "Well I guess I can stay for you." She said "Mind taking your hood off." "Not at all for you" Shadow said. This made the girl blush even more. As shadow pulled down his hood revealing his longer brown hair and blue eyes. "So how do I look?" Shadow asked. "Amazing." Said the girl "I'm Ashley. What's your name." "Shadow is what everyone calls me." Replied shadow. This was the best day of his life so far. As the bell rang Ashley kissed shadow's cheek. "See ya around I guess" She said as she walked away. Shadow would never let anyone ruin this. End of Chapter 1
Chapter 2 As shadow walked into the school everyone was looking at him funny, then he realized this was the first time that his hood wasn't up. He didn't mind it at all so he continued walking through the hall. As he went to his first class he saw Ashley walk in and take a seat in the middle. He took the seat beside her. "Hey." She said blushing. "Hey." Said shadow. Just then the teacher walked in. "Where's shadow?" She asked. "Right here." Shadow said. The teacher looked shocked that he was actually sitting beside somebody and his hood was down. "Ok class today we will be learning about the ancient African Zulu." The teacher said. "Does anyone know anything about them?" "They lived in Africa." Shadow said. There was a few laughs here and there. "Very good." The teacher stared at shadow. After the class finished it was lunch Ashley sat next to shadow. "Ashley there's something you should know." Shadow said. "What?" She replied "They hit kids in this school. I know people are messed up." Shadow said. "Yeah that's just wrong my old school hit kids too though." Ashley said. "I love you" Shadow whispered thinking Ashley wouldn't hear. "Really?" She replied blushing. As soon as shadow realized that she heard him his cheeks were very red. "It's ok hun." Ashley said kissing shadows cheek. "I love you too.". Just as both of their blushes went away the bell rang. "I gotta go" Said shadow hugging Ashley. End of Chapter 2
Chapter 3 As shadow walked out of class he looked around for Ashley. He couldn't see her so he decided to walk home. Just as he was about to get off the school yard he remembered that he forgot something in his locker. He quickly ran inside. "Hey I didn't think you'd still be here" Ashley said. Shadow turned around "I just forgot something in my locker". He explained. "Sure. I bet you were waiting for me." Ashely said smirking. "No I thought you already left" Shadow said well he was smiling. Ashley hugged him. "So do you have a girlfriend?" She asked. "Not yet but there's a girl I like." Shadow said. Ashley blushed. "Well we could date." She said still blushing. "I'd like that" shadow said. As they walked outta the school Ashley looked around nervously. "What's wrong?" Shadow asked. "Oh, nothing I guess." Just then she saw him. "Hey!" The man yelled running right at them. "Shadow we have to get out of here." Ashley said she was scared. "Who is this guy?" Shadow asked. "I'll explain later just get out of here." The man was already too close though. "We're caught." Shadow said "I'll just have to fight my way out of this." "No!" Ashley said. The man stopped right in front of them. "Give me the girl!" He screamed. "If you want her you have to fight for her" Shadow said raising his fists. "Fine by me." The man said. He was almost twice shadow's size. "Let him take me." Ashley said "I don't want you hurt." "Ashley I'd rather die then give you to him." Shadow said. "Are you two gonna keep being love birds or is your boyfriend gonna fight?" The man said. To be continued...