This is my first story. Its just the beginning. I hope you like it Lois Ever since i was a little girl, i have been facinaced by the stars. By the magical balls of floatung dust creating magnificant patterns and galaxies. I always wanted to travel there and be appart of the night sky for eternity presenting my glowing self to the universe. But i know this will never happen. If only i knew the truth. Fact Every decission made creats a new world. Every little detail, thought, feeling and person that requires A decission creats a new world slightly similar to the original one but each decission has its consequences. These world are all around us , in out galaxy surrounded by lafayan dust which creats light on one side appearing to be a ball of light from the outaide but from the inside it is invisible . Each star is a new world based on the decission of others and when that decission is countered or the reason for its creation is no longer existing then that world gets engulfed by the lafayan dust that was previousley locked out by the purpous. Kyle Chocolate brown circles with streaks of mindnight black blossoming from the middle. Her eyes so beautiful, it breaks my heart to blink and remove her image from my mind. Her long waving honey coloured hair weaving it way between my fingers tying itself to me. Her lips perfect not a fault could be placed on her and as i moved closer to her, our lips meeting, i knew that no one in the universe could be as lucky as i am right now Lois Falling in love seemed the easiest of things to do. Its like he glitters as i go past him, everyone else is dulled in comparison to him causing my eyes to autimayically look towards his light. I knew he felt the same and on that day that he took me into the medow under the great oak and looked deeply into my eyes and twirled my hair through his fingers, i knew that i was the luckiest girl in the universe as his lipps pressed against mine. As soon as our lips met i felt a tug on my heart. It felt so strong as if our hesrts were tied together and only the beat of the other could be heard. But no matter how strong this was and the way i was feeling i knew that my heart was being pulled far away, further than i could imagine. I was deeplyin love with this man sittin infront of me but i knew that fate had chosen its path tying me to something beyond this world Kyle I woke up, sweat dripping down my face, my eyes wide open with my heart beating like a butterfly. My breath started to quicken and then it stopped and one loud beat of my heart sealed us together. It was like a net had been put around my heart, allowing it to be let out for others to see but always attached to the other side where the true owner lay. I knew that my heart was built for her and the reason for its beating was to see her face. Lois I woke up, breathless but calm i felt that someone else had come into my net, sealing our hearts together but still so distant. I knew that my life would change Dull images. Little snippets of life, but from a different world. Brief sounds, ocxasional smells, all familliar but with a slight twist i knew all the people but they seemed different by a fraction.
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