SENTINEL feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by colonial, Jun 21, 2011.

  1. Thank you stora
     
  2. Interesting both the story, and the people who posted on this feedback thread.

    If you hadn't been a mod, this would've been overlooked.
     
  3. Maybe? Certainly.
     
  4. Your welcome
     
  5. Haha... Couldn't find Sentinel though. But there's this really awesome story called Setinel, and it's awesome! Man, I hope you're not trying to prank us Colon, because I'm sure the writer of Setinel is way better than yours. xD

    iZaln
     
  6. Like it so far col, keep up the good work!
     
  7. Counsel or council? This is the question...
     
  8. You spelled "SENTINEL" wrong.


    it says setinel
     
  9. Zero, he said not to say that.  You're gonna get the wrath of a mod now.
    I like teh story.. Just needs.... MOAR.
     
  10. anyways, i luv the story, bro
     
  11. Fixed mistakes
     

  12. More
    Seth