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This is the first story that i have written and i know that i switch tenses around and cant post very often (blame shool for that one) but please dont be to hard on me

 

*school *too

 

@fail its a few story's below on fan fiction

 

have add a small part about the interview and want to put more but have no idea what to write... please post any ideas you have

 

just posted some more sorry ive not been on a lot resently been very busy