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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Rainkeeper, Jul 9, 2010.

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  1. W00t!!! Second story for when I have writers block on Traitors. Ignore the extra code on the 1st post.

    Semper Fi
     
    #1 Rainkeeper, Jul 9, 2010
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    #2 Bastion, Jul 9, 2010
  3. 
     
    #3 Rainkeeper, Jul 9, 2010
  4. Also yes, I failed at the title but I'm in a rush.
     
    #4 Rainkeeper, Jul 9, 2010
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    #5 Bastion, Jul 9, 2010
  6. I like my companies name better. I do not support the prefix "i". 
     
    #6 Rainkeeper, Jul 9, 2010
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    #7 Bastion, Jul 9, 2010
  8. As you can see from these images the species iSebastion has no brain and heart.
     
    #8 Rainkeeper, Jul 9, 2010
  9. Not bad. Can I be a fellow dispatched sniper?

    ~iDan~
     
    #9 DanCahill, Jul 9, 2010
  10. Sure, especially since I'm having trouble fitting you in Traitors.
     
    #10 Rainkeeper, Jul 9, 2010
  11. You'll be a main character.
     
    #11 Rainkeeper, Jul 9, 2010
  12. Okey dokey artichokey

    ~iDan~
     
    #12 DanCahill, Jul 9, 2010
  13. /Support

    Get er' done.
     
    #13 Bastion, Jul 9, 2010
  14. 7000 for Bast (ard) 
     
    #14 Rainkeeper, Jul 9, 2010
  15. Great start!
     
    #15 *Irin (01), Jul 9, 2010
  16. Apparently I die. 
     
    #16 Bastion, Jul 9, 2010
  17. 
     
    #17 Rainkeeper, Jul 9, 2010
  18. Lol jk I live forever duh
     
    #18 Bastion, Jul 9, 2010
  19. Well you might die....
     
    #19 Rainkeeper, Jul 9, 2010
  20. Put me in as a air force rouge
     
    #20 mathew057, Jul 9, 2010
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