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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *-_---_- (01), Sep 1, 2010.

  1. Any veiws exepted and welcome help me improve my story
     
  2. Like what u think
     
  3. U spelled it wrong
     
  4. Lol oh ye it's iPod it's ****
     
  5. Spelling corection
     
  6. It's nice so far man but just work on spelling and character personalization u do those you'll b fine
     
  7. If u need help on a war novel look at interception and also u need to b especially specific on them in my opinion because they hav certain weapons that u just can't call guns or tanks or planes