Please don't comment here I will make a feedback page this is the 4th time I rewrote this so please don't be too harsh ******************************************* "Ella hurry up you don't want to be late for school your bus is already on our street" Ella's mom screamed "I'm coming mom!" Ella yelled back as she quickly attached her favorite blue teardrop shaped necklace she ran down the stairs and ran onto her bus before her mother could say anything. Ella picked a seat next to her best friend Adam."Hey Adam" Ella said as she sat next to him "Hey Ella!" Adam said looking at his cellphone "Whose that picture of?" Ella asked as she peered over Adam's shoulder to see a picture of him and a blonde girl "Um.. It's my girlfriend." Adam said blushing "Your girlfriend..since when?!" Ella exclaimed "Lower your voices you too" the bus driver said "Who is?where is she from?How old is she?" Ella blurted "Um it's Emily from school" Adam said looking down "..Emily....." Ella said crestfallen "I know that you don't like her but" Adam said quickly but was cut off by Ella "Your becoming like one of the popular kids" she said tears brimming in her eyes "You..You promised you would never..never" Ella broke down crying and just then the bus stopped Ella ran so fast out of the bus she made cheetahs look bad she ran into the girls bathroom crying but before she could get into the bathroom stall to bawl her eyes out Emily walked in the bathroom with her usual friends that constantly followed her "Hey..." Ella said trying not the slap Emily "Oh hey Ella what's wrong what happened?" Emily said looking concerned but Ella knew this bunch of girls ( Ella had moved to more than 5 schools win her life so she rarely trusted anyone...well except Adam) she glared at them and ran out of the girls bathroom and directly into Adam "Ella I'm so sorry ok can I just" Adam said but was cut off again by Ella "No Adam you can't explain I trusted you I thought you wanted to be my friend" Ella said looking hurt "I do but Emily is really nice you just have to get to know her" Adam said "I'm sorry ok" "it's alright" Ella said sniffling "It's just I only trust you and.." this time Ella was cut off by Adam "I know it's ok Ella" he said hugging her. Later after the small ordeal Ella was closing her locker and Emily came up behind her "Hey wanna come to my pool party?" she asked "It's at 8pm" Ella remembered what Adam told her " Uh...Sure I'll come" she replied "Ugh I still have to get a swimsuit" she thought to herself. Then she saw Adam he was walking with his friends and his fiery red hair looked even more amazingly red in the sun "Hey Ella" Adam said "See you at the pool party" "Yeah see you there" she replied That night at 7pm Ella and her mom were frantically shopping for swimsuits and Ella couldn't decide between the one piece or bikini "Sweetie get the one piece you will look amazing" her mom said so Ella decided on the one piece when they arrived at Emily's house it was massive Ella ran out of the car and into what looked like Emily's sister "Hello I'm Emily's mom you must be Ella Emily has told me so much about you" Emily's mom said smiling "I'm sure she has" Ella thought to herself "If you want to change the bathroom is down this hallway take 2 rights then a left and there the bathroom is sorry if it's messy" She said apologetically "Uh ok" Ella said running into the backyard then she saw Adam he was standing next to the pool and he was ready to jump in when he saw Ella he ran over to her "Hey Ella what's up" he said " are you gonna come in the water or dip your toes in like Emily?" "Uh no I'll change wheres the bathroom?" Ella asked "Here I'll show you" Adam said leading her to the bathroom as Ella changed he leaned his head against the wall when Ella came out she was silently praying that she looked somewhat decent "You look amazing Ella" Adam said "Let's head back to the pool" he said walking back to the pool with Ella But before they got the chance to go in Emily's mom stopped them "Hey Adam can you and Ella go across the street and pick me up a cole really quick I would but my nails are drying" Emily's mom asked "Uh ok" Adam and Ella said in unison as Adam and Ella walked across the street Adam wrapped his jacket around Ella "Thanks Adam" Ella said as they entered the store the cashier eyed them suspiciously but then left them alone they bought the cole and then the walked out but as the looked both ways and then crossed the street a car zipped onto their street and before Adam noticed it came straight for him "ADAM!" Screamed Ella instinctively pushed Adam away. Adam flew onto the concrete and coke spayed around them in a instant the cashier was outside screaming and all the kids at the pool party were screaming "Ella?" Adam asked looking around "Oh my god call an ambulance he screamed when he saw his jacket next to Ella with blood all over it. In 5 minutes the ambulance were there an Adam was cradling Ella in his arms "please let me come with you" Adam begged the ambulance driver "she saved my life" later at the hospital Ella's parents were there crying and Adam was even crying "I'm so sorry" he said "its my fault" "no it's not" Ella's parents said. "young man you can come in" one of the doctors said Adam walked in and saw Ella her black hair that she had been growing for over 3 years was tattered and she was hooked up to millions of machines "Oh Ella" Adam said stroking her face ********************************************PLEASE COMMENT ON MY FEEDBACK PAGE THXSif you want me to write more wall me or comment on my feedback page
"you cant die on me" he said brushing the tears away from his face. The doctor walked back in holding a clipboard "Is everything alright with Ella?"Adam asked the doctor gave him a Are-you-serious look and then said "I'm sorry no,we have to run tests on her and we will have to run tests but for sure she broke 4 ribs she hit her face pretty hard on the concrete and also her arm is broken from pushing you" "Oh" Adam said looking down. The next day at school rumors were flying before school started but as soon as Adam walked in the people who were talking stopped and the ones dumb enough to continue talking were shut up by Adam glaring at them "Adam!" Emily said running up to him "I saw what happened and I was gonna visit the hospital with some of my friends do you wanna come?" She asked "Sure" Adam said walking into the school. The rest of the day was boring, pointless to Adam since he was worried about Ella. After school Adam, Emily and Emily's friends came over to the hospital where Ella was. When they entered Ella's room there was a Doctor there who let them in "Be quiet and gentle" the doctor warned them "she's still drugged up for the pain and to help her sleep "Uh ok" the kids said quietly "Hey Ella" Emily said smiling at Ella's sleeping face here I got some balloons for you and maybe if the doctor doesn't see me I can brush your hair" "here I'll do her nails" One of Emily's friends piped in "I'll do her toes!" the other said "Uh..." Adam said looking awkwardly around "I'll be at the vending machine anyone want something?" he asked "Nope" all the girls said in unison "Bye Adam!" Emily said blowing him a kiss. Adams face went red then he disappeared out of the room. Meanwhile in Ella's extended sleeping hours she heard bits and pieces of what was happening it was like she was underwater but she couldn't get to the surface all she heard was "Let's do her nails" And Emily volunteering to do her hair then she heard "his" voice "ADAM!" Ella wanted to scream but she had no voice she barley even had the strength to open an eye "I guess I'll have to endure a manicure,pedicure and my hair getting styled by my worst nemesis" Ella though sourly ***************End of story(4 now)****** Please only comment on the feedback page thxs
After the torture of getting a full makeover by her nemesis Ella slowly began regaining conscienceless her first words were "How long have I been asleep?" All Ellas Family members and friends laughed and cried their Ella was back! The next Ella refused to stay any longer at the hospital she was discharged the next day and during school Adam helped her with her books and walked home with her "SOOOOO..." Ella said looking down "Why did you push me?" Adam asked "Pardon?" She said "Why did you push me from that car" Adam asked looking directly at Ella "Umm..Well I " she was cut off by Adam "Are you suicidal?" He asked "NO!" Ella exclaimed as she moved her hair behind her ear "Its just that when the car was coming toward us I couldn't bear the thought of you getting hurt so I pushed you" she said "I don't think that's the truth" Adam said ".....well I guess I could tell you...I'm a guardian Angel and before you ask question I don't have wings,I'm your age,I'm not immortal,and I didn't have to push you but I wanted to" Ella said her face red "Uh.." Adam said his face completely confused "So why are you here?" ********************************************Please comment on my feedback page thxs
"Ella!" a voice said "Ella wake up it's me Emily" Emily said peering at Ella and Adam stood next to her Ella was in the hospital "Wait did I faint or something?" Ella questioned "No you've been asleep this whole time" Adam said "Thank god that was a dream it was soo werid" Ella thought to herself "Uh..Guys can I talk to Ella privately" Adam asked "Sure" Emily said as hr and her friends left the room giggling "I have something to tell you!"Ella and Adam said in unison "You first" Adam said as Ella told him her dream his eyes got wide "Well Uh... I'm a Garduian Angel I was meant to protect you and I'm so sorry" Adam said his head bent "Oh Adam" Ella said her eyes tearing up she leaned next to him and kissed him on the cheek. His face turned red and he smiled and got up Ella fell into her bed then she flat-lined "ELLA!" Adam screamed "DOCTOR!" a doctor rushed in and while Ella was being heart shocked another doctor pulled him aside "Hello Adam um..well the reason Ella flat lined was because well she feel very strongly about you that whenever she is near you she can't contain herself so lay off on the touching and stuff for a while" The doctor said "Uh ok" Adam said looking at Ella she was on the bed looking around as if nothing had happened
Above some paragraphs are song names listen to them as you read I believe that these fit with each paragraph Snow patrol chasing cars Peaceful and asleep Adam was curled up into the small hospital chair which couldn't support his tall muscular frame. Ella found herself staring at him again, she scolded herself silently. She wanted to touch his face again, she kept replaying Adams face when she kissed him On the cheek his face turned so red, she laughed out loud then fell silent in case Adam woke up. Some nurses walked by giving her a nervous look and walked on. She was discharged (for real) that afternoon and Adam volunteered to help Ella around school but someone else had already asked. Dig-incubus "Emily!!" Ella exclaimed "how could you let her...ARGH!!" Ella screamed in frustration as her parents told her that it was their decision between Emily or Adam. "She's a girl and you two are becoming friends" her mother replied in a matter of fact tone. "So Its just because I like Adam?" Ella said quietly beginning to calm down "No,it's because you need some time away from Adam" her father said looking at Ella as her face went from barely calm to an anger she had never felt along with a loss she had never felt before. "fine" she replied in monotone voice. "Oh and Ella,Emily called and wanted to go shopping with you. I think that it would be good for you." her mother said "All right all right I'll go" Ella said. She was somewhat excited to go shopping and try to be normal and forget everything that had happened to her the past month. "ELLA! Are you even paying attention?" Emily squealed as she dragged Ella into one of the stores that overloads with cheap perfume and has overpriced clothes "Whats this store called again?" Ella muttered "Overload" Emily said matter of factly "they have the most fashionable clothes! And great perfumes, well let's look around shall we" the two girls walked around and scoured the store. Then Ella stopped in front of a mannequin on it had the prettiest outfit cute brown shorts with suspenders and a long brown shirt tucked in. "Better grab it before someone else does" Emily said quietly Colours-Grouplove "AHH! you can't just come up behind me and do that." Ella whispered back noticing that there was one of the outfit left she grabbed it and continued searching. "Hey look here Ella, free makeup sessions you should try it I'm sure you'd look great in makeup!" Emily said flouncing over to the already long line for the session "Uh..I'd rather not" Ella responded "C'mon you can take it of later" Emily pleaded "Fine" Ella said looking around sullenly. After the wait of 2 hours she saw the makeup stylist (who was a guy) and he immediately started in a flurry of brushes and powder. "Uh excuse me? What exactly are you doing" Ella said nervously looking at the stylist she silently also noted that his eyes were a piercing amber brown that took her breath away. "Doing my job" then he laughed and threw back his head when he looked at her again a piece of his blonde-brown hair fell in his face. He finished then handed her a card with all the instruction of what he did on the bottom it had his name "Alex" "well um thanks Alex" Ella said looking up at him. as Ella got up she had to drag Emily away from staring at Alex. As they left the mall Emily handed Ella another bag "Here well wear this tomorrow for me please ok I assembled this just for you okay, I've seen you looking at that cute basketball player in our class so go for it" Emily said quickly then walked off to her car. Holding the bag and went on her bike and rode off "The basketball guy!" Ella though to herself " she has absolutely no idea" Sail-AWOLNATION The first day Ella returned to school all the kids stared at her in a way that they used to never look before: admiration the outfit Emily put together for Ella was anything but ordinary with a flirty floral dress and cork wedges she had her make done by none other than Emily herself. Ellas brown eyes stood out with the smokey eye shadow. Adam was talking with his friends from the baseball team and looked up and Ella in disbelief all his others friends stared with him. "Hey Adam" Emily said as she kissed him, he kissed her back but his eyes were glued on Ella who walked in the wedges as if she had her entire life. ******************************* please comment on my feedback pg ^^ will post more Plz post in feedback
please comment on my feedback pg ^^ will post more Plz post in feedback Rocketeer by Far East Movement The boys couldn't stop staring at her and Ella slightly enjoyed it but she only wanted one boys attention...Adams. She sighed and waited for the bell to ring signaling the end of the long boring high school day. As the bell rang, the stream of kids leaving the building steadily increased and Ella headed to her locker before she headed home. A familiar face appeared in the crowd of kids..."Adam!" Ella shouted a little too eager as he headed toward her. "Hey" Adam said as he ran his hands through his now shaggy hair. "Uh..Hey" Ella responded back suddenly at a loss of words "So...you wanna hang out?" they both said in unison. "Um..so you want to hang out around 8 ish in front of the park?" Adam asked looking directly into her eyes. "Sounds great" Ella said trying to contain her joy. At around 8 o clock Ella arrived in front of the park. The lush grass and the sun beginning to head down, was making this "meeting" extremely romantic. "Hey!" Adam said as he headed towards Ella. "Hey so why did you want to talk about?" Ella replied looking nervously at Adam. "I wanted to..." Adanm started but then he looked down. " I wanted to say that, I will always be here for you." "Whats that supposed to mean!" Ella said, her eyes beginning to fill with tears. " My family is moving to China.. I'm sorry I haven't told you until now I just didn't know how to..." He said sorrowfully "Wh When are you leaving!" Ella said a hint of anger in her voice. Cliffhanger Comment if u want me 2 continue *****************************************************