Hey guys, i'm new to the whole story writing and what not. So your feedback is more than welcome here! I'll try to post as often as possible. Thanks a lot! Link to story... viewtopic.php?f=12&t=31385
Woah, this was really cool! You had a very good exposition/prologue/situational set-up (which is pretty much exposition, but I wanted to say three things), and your first bit of story was really descriptive and mood-setting and just good. XD ^_^ I'll have to keep reading it! (And maybe I'll think up a character, too!)
Kandee, 19, raised in a trailer park, ran away from home when she was 16, she was abused by her stepfather since she was 11 and all of it was ignored by her mother. She is light blond with dark brown eyes, 5'4, she looks like she is 15-16 because of malnourishment and heroin addiction. She became a prostitute because being used by people was the only thing she knew but this time she had the control to choose who and when and how much she was worth. She just found out she is 4 months pregnant and has no idea who the father, she has decided to keep the baby and quit her "job" and be the mother she never had. Good luck Klassik =^.^=
Good character pink Ill work it into the story, might take a while but all your characters will be added
I'm curious to know what you the readers think of the story and where do you think it's headed. Please let me know on here and compare among each other
Great story so far, if you still need characters you could name one after me. Greg Earth or something early 20's average guy.