S.T.R.I.K.E Feedback thread

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Lord_Zethor, Mar 21, 2011.

  1. Thou shalt give thy feedback here ye.

    Translation:
    Give your feedback here so I can better my writing.


    Pretty colors!
     
  2. Hmmm nice intro
     
  3. Pretty good so far. 