Rising Shadows: FEEDBACK

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Platinum2, Jun 25, 2011.

  1. Well... First time writing a story, so everything's welcome lol
    Criticism, ideas all welcome :)

    Here's a link to the story
     
    #1 Platinum2, Jun 25, 2011
  2. Yeahhhhhh lol! Haha hmm... Looking at the titles... Kinda rings a bell don't they xD?

    iZaln
     
    #2 Nlaz, Jun 25, 2011
  3. XD lol Thanks for helping out with those Zaln
     
    #3 Platinum2, Jun 25, 2011
  4. NP, just some stuff thought might pertain to the story and what revolves around the plot and leading up. ;D

    iZaln
     
    #4 Nlaz, Jun 25, 2011
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