Rise of the Minor Gods Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Kimber03 (01), Aug 12, 2010.

  1. Post feedback for the story here. And for an extra, to see how many people like my story I will need at least ten positive posts so I can post my first chapter. Thanks! :)
     
  2. Re: Rise of the Minors Feedback

    The plot is good, I look foward to reading it.
     
  3. Re: Rise of the Minors Feedback

    Bump
     
  4. Re: Rise of the Minors Feedback

    Bump for more reviews.
     
  5. Re: Rise of the Minors Feedback

    Looks good! Can I b n it?
     
  6. Re: Rise of the Minors Feedback

    Depends. I'll see if I need more characters
     
  7. I think a more creative name would have been better, but the summary looks pretty interesting.
     
  8. I know I'm not so good with titles. Any suggestions for a new title?
     
  9. A Plan Forgotten, maybe? I'm not sure.
     
  10. **UPDATE**
    I'm going to be accepting ideas for titles and a few new characters.
    This is what the bio. For the character should look like.
    Name:
    Age:
    Appearance:
    Bio:
    Parent: (which god or goddess is he/she the child of)
    Weapon:
     
  11. Name: Kantos
    Age: 18
    Appearance:wears an all-blue cloak with white lining.
    Bio: Loves water, is a great swimmer and manipulates water to fight.
    Weapon: Blue Schimitar
    Son of: Posidon
     
  12. I need more characters!
     
  13. So far these are the characters I have: 
    MAIN:
    Name: Hector Daniels
    Age: 13
    Appearance: Spiked dark brown hair, hazel eyes with a blueish tint, often wear T-shirt and jeans
    Weapons: Large sword, electricity 
    Mother: Sandra Daniels
    Father: Zeus
    Personality: Cocky, show off, arrogant, flirt(Before loss of memory)

    Name: Selene Hunter
    Age: 13
    Appearance: Long bleached blonde hair, blue eyes that are almost white, often wears belted tunic and silver laurel wreath
    Weapons: Bow and arrow (arrows tips are either silver or obsidian)
    Mother: Artemis
    Father: Trent Hunter
    Personality: Stubborn, shy (especially to boys,) perfectionist

    SUGGESTED:
    -Kantos
     
  14. Name Luke
    Weapons Ice Spear
    Age 15
    Father Posiedon
    Apperance Blonde hair blue eyes tall and thin
    Bio Has no idea who his mother is grew
    up on the streets meet his father Posieson when he was 12 and was given the spear
     
  15. Bro of kantos? If darkfalcon wants
     
  16. Not bad. I'll probably use both characters but no promises they'll have the same names.
     
  17. K all I want is to have him in
     
  18. Name: Wolf Spirit
    Age:14
    Gender: Male
    Appearance: Long, silky, jet black hair.piercing red eyes. Wears a pitch black hoodie and soot stained jeans. Worn sneakers and a silky black cloak with a gray trim.
    Weapons: 2 h sword
    Father: Hades
    Mother: Unknown
    Personality: strong and silent

    That's my idea, hoped u liked it!