Revolution Feedback and chat

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Aug 11, 2011.

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  1. Hey guys! If you want to criticize or compliment Revolution, here's the place!
     
    #1 cheesemuffin, Aug 11, 2011
  2. The first post on the story was just an intro. Another post is coming in just a sec.
     
    #2 cheesemuffin, Aug 11, 2011
  3. Second.

    A classic short chapter.
     
    #3 Interrobang, Aug 11, 2011
  4. Well, it's short XD

    It looked long when I was writing it...

    Anyways, enjoy!
     
    #4 cheesemuffin, Aug 11, 2011
  5. No feedback?

    :S
     
    #5 cheesemuffin, Aug 11, 2011
  6. Anyone? D:
     
    #6 cheesemuffin, Aug 11, 2011
  7. Not me. :S I like it so far. :3
     
    #7 Smighter89, Aug 11, 2011
  8. Feather slamming his fist is what I imagine him doing everytime someone makes a rp >.> I love the intro :) can't wait for more
     
    #8 Allioss, Aug 11, 2011
  9. I loooove it  Can't wait till all the other characters come in 
     
    #9 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Aug 11, 2011
  10. Great beginning, everyone seems to be portrayed well.
     
    #10 Storallelite, Aug 11, 2011
  11. Finally wrote it. Enjoy!
     
    #11 cheesemuffin, Aug 12, 2011
  12. WEWT!
     
    #12 Smighter89, Aug 12, 2011
  13. I'm in the 3rd post! Last time I was in the like 6th! :D
     
    #13 Smighter89, Aug 12, 2011
  14. ༄Ahhhh it's awesome. More! I wanna read more of Revo! Cmon!༄

    iZaln
     
    #14 Nlaz, Aug 12, 2011
  15. Genius! XD
     
    #15 Winters, Aug 12, 2011
  16. I was bored, and couldn't sleep... So I did what I NEVER DO:

    Wrote two chapters in one day
     
    #16 cheesemuffin, Aug 12, 2011
  17. NO WAI!!!! :D Good one. 
     
    #17 Smighter89, Aug 12, 2011
  18. Cool story bro! Really I mean it!
     
    #18 Original_SwordMaster, Aug 12, 2011
  19. It's very good 
    Can't wait for the next chapter 
     
    #19 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Aug 12, 2011
  20. NO WAY

    OHMAIGAWSH
     
    #20 TheSilverPanda, Aug 12, 2011
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