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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 27, 2010.

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  1. Post what you think feel free to criticize. Thanx zaln for the edit. More story to come.
    Tyvm
     
    #1 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 27, 2010
  2. Excellent  are me and Zaln going to be siblings?
     
    #2 *iPimella (01), Nov 27, 2010
  3. Nice work.
     
    #3 *Kimber03 (01), Nov 27, 2010
  4. If you want to and yes the story is about the legend of Zelda. Play the games. Lol jk
     
    #4 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 27, 2010
  5. Ch 1 coming up tonight or tomaro morning
     
    #5 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 27, 2010
  6. Oh damn didn't know it was gonna revolve round loz lol this is gonna b good (is I in it)
     
    #6 german_idiot, Nov 27, 2010
  7. I actually don't care  its your story, you decide
     
    #7 *iPimella (01), Nov 27, 2010
  8. It's placed in present day all questions will be answered in Ch 1
     
    #8 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 27, 2010
  9. I wanna be a goron. Listen to theGoron city song! It's all gung-ho!
     
    #9 Fangedwolf, Nov 27, 2010
  10. Or..... A skull kid. Or.....ummmm......a......cucoo.
    Or even..... An oocoo!!
     
    #10 Fangedwolf, Nov 27, 2010
  11. Golden oocca
     
    #11 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 27, 2010
  12. It's an oocoo. Not an ooca
     
    #12 Fangedwolf, Nov 27, 2010
  13. Ooccoo
     
    #13 Fangedwolf, Nov 27, 2010
  14. And don't there need to be some special item? The Staff of Space. Meh. The... Kolo Flower. Dunno. Brainstorming.
     
    #14 Fangedwolf, Nov 27, 2010
  15. Ooca are the race that ooccoos are
     
    #15 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 27, 2010
  16. New chapter up sets up story. I hope you like it. Or better Love it! Jk

     
    #16 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 27, 2010
  17. Ok.
     
    #17 Fangedwolf, Nov 27, 2010
  18. Coomments???
     
    #18 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 27, 2010
  19. Done writing for today so hope I did good..
     
    #19 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 27, 2010
  20. Muy bueno man very good
     
    #20 german_idiot, Nov 27, 2010
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