Relentless love feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Mr_Bluejay, Sep 4, 2010.

  1. Please be nice about my story although constructive critisism is welcomed
     
    #1 Mr_Bluejay, Sep 4, 2010
  2. I really like your story, u should post more!
     
    #2 *lady-marian (01), Sep 4, 2010
  3. Why thanks I wrote more but I lost alot it needs to be re written
     
    #3 Mr_Bluejay, Sep 4, 2010
  4. Wait I thought u stopped this ur bringing it back?
     
    #4 german_idiot, Sep 4, 2010
  5. That really sucks! I hate re-writeing!
     
    #5 *lady-marian (01), Sep 4, 2010
  6. Yes
     
    #6 Mr_Bluejay, Sep 4, 2010
  7. Cool what I read of it was really good
     
    #7 german_idiot, Sep 4, 2010
  8. Very good!
     
    #8 Bastion, Sep 4, 2010
  9. Gd job, can't wait for the rest!
     
    #9 WW1225, Sep 4, 2010
  10. Bastion likes it I'm so happy 
     
    #10 Mr_Bluejay, Sep 5, 2010
  11. Zach I can edit it tomo if u email me it
     
    #11 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Sep 5, 2010
  12. No
     
    #12 Mr_Bluejay, Sep 5, 2010
  13. Oh u not writing toghter 
     
    #13 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Sep 5, 2010
  14. Nope
     
    #14 Mr_Bluejay, Sep 5, 2010
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