Relentless love feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Mr_Bluejay, Aug 15, 2010.

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  1. This is the feedback thread for relentless love so post your thoughts and ideas here
     
    #1 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 15, 2010
  2. Even better
     
    #2 mattu, Aug 15, 2010
  3. Thanks Matt did u like the bit added about how he was a goth
     
    #3 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 15, 2010
  4. Yes it is a good addition to your story. It gives you more information about Nico
     
    #4 mattu, Aug 15, 2010
  5. I struggle with characters myself I owe alot to Angus for his inspiring bios
     
    #5 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 15, 2010
  6. Great job!!!!
     
    #6 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 15, 2010
  7. Angus is a good bio writer
     
    #7 mattu, Aug 15, 2010
  8. Thx
     
    #8 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 15, 2010
  9. Also if u read very closely you will notice quite a large change in the action scene
     
    #9 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 15, 2010
  10. Tis gr8
     
    #10 *cupcake96 (01), Aug 15, 2010
  11. Yes
     
    #11 mattu, Aug 15, 2010
  12. Thanks guys very encouraging
     
    #12 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 15, 2010
  13. Great job!!
     
    #13 Porygod, Aug 15, 2010
  14. What is your name on pal?
     
    #14 mattu, Aug 15, 2010
  15. Ginger u better change it lol

    GOO GINGER GREAT JOB
    GOO ME GREAT BIO AND LITTTLE EDITING

    I'M GETTING THE DRAFT IN EMAIL I GONNA EDIT THEN POST HERE
     
    #15 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 15, 2010
  16. Join the group anti perv squad I'll b in there under the name zach&dani=love
     
    #16 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 15, 2010
  17. Or Ginger fan club which I'll make
     
    #17 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 15, 2010
  18. Lol
     
    #18 mattu, Aug 15, 2010
  19. You're name is sweet
     
    #19 mattu, Aug 15, 2010
  20. The group called ginger's fans
     
    #20 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 15, 2010
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